Proofreading improvements for the Administration documentation book.

doc/src/sgml/backup.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/backup.sgml,v 2.139 2010/01/26 06:45:31 petere Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/backup.sgml,v 2.140 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="backup">
  <title>Backup and Restore</title>
@@ -20,8 +20,7 @@
    <listitem><para>File system level backup</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>Continuous archiving</para></listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
-  Each has its own strengths and weaknesses.
-  Each is discussed in turn below.
+  Each has its own strengths and weaknesses; each is discussed in turn below.
  </para>
 
  <sect1 id="backup-dump">
@@ -37,14 +36,14 @@
 <synopsis>
 pg_dump <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable class="parameter">outfile</replaceable>
 </synopsis>
-   As you see, <application>pg_dump</> writes its results to the
+   As you see, <application>pg_dump</> writes its result to the
    standard output. We will see below how this can be useful.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    <application>pg_dump</> is a regular <productname>PostgreSQL</>
    client application (albeit a particularly clever one). This means
-   that you can do this backup procedure from any remote host that has
+   that you can perform this backup procedure from any remote host that has
    access to the database. But remember that <application>pg_dump</>
    does not operate with special permissions. In particular, it must
    have read access to all tables that you want to back up, so in
@@ -76,8 +75,8 @@ pg_dump <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable cl
 
   <para>
    Dumps created by <application>pg_dump</> are internally consistent,
-   that is, the dump represents a snapshot of the database as of the time
-   <application>pg_dump</> begins running. <application>pg_dump</> does not
+   meaning, the dump represents a snapshot of the database at the time
+   <application>pg_dump</> began running. <application>pg_dump</> does not
    block other operations on the database while it is working.
    (Exceptions are those operations that need to operate with an
    exclusive lock, such as most forms of <command>ALTER TABLE</command>.)
@@ -85,9 +84,9 @@ pg_dump <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable cl
 
   <important>
    <para>
-    If your database schema relies on OIDs (for instance as foreign
+    If your database schema relies on OIDs (for instance, as foreign
     keys) you must instruct <application>pg_dump</> to dump the OIDs
-    as well. To do this, use the <option>-o</option> command line
+    as well. To do this, use the <option>-o</option> command-line
     option.
    </para>
   </important>
@@ -102,43 +101,43 @@ pg_dump <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable cl
 <synopsis>
 psql <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> &lt; <replaceable class="parameter">infile</replaceable>
 </synopsis>
-    where <replaceable class="parameter">infile</replaceable> is what
-    you used as <replaceable class="parameter">outfile</replaceable>
-    for the <application>pg_dump</> command. The database <replaceable
+    where <replaceable class="parameter">infile</replaceable> is the
+    file output by the <application>pg_dump</> command. The database <replaceable
     class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> will not be created by this
     command, so you must create it yourself from <literal>template0</>
     before executing <application>psql</> (e.g., with
     <literal>createdb -T template0 <replaceable
     class="parameter">dbname</></literal>).  <application>psql</>
-    supports options similar to <application>pg_dump</>'s for specifying
+    supports options similar to <application>pg_dump</> for specifying
     the database server to connect to and the user name to use. See
     the <xref linkend="app-psql"> reference page for more information.
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    Before restoring a SQL dump, all the users who own objects or were
+    Before restoring an SQL dump, all the users who own objects or were
     granted permissions on objects in the dumped database must already
-    exist. If they do not, then the restore will fail to recreate the
+    exist. If they do not, the restore will fail to recreate the
     objects with the original ownership and/or permissions.
     (Sometimes this is what you want, but usually it is not.)
    </para>
 
    <para>
     By default, the <application>psql</> script will continue to
-    execute after an SQL error is encountered. You might wish to use the
-    following command at the top of the script to alter that
+    execute after an SQL error is encountered. You might wish to run
+    <application>psql</application> with
+    the <literal>ON_ERROR_STOP</> variable set to alter that
     behaviour and have <application>psql</application> exit with an
     exit status of 3 if an SQL error occurs:
 <programlisting>
-\set ON_ERROR_STOP
+psql --set ON_ERROR_STOP=on dbname &lt; infile
 </programlisting>
-    Either way, you will have an only partially restored database.
+    Either way, you will only have a partially restored database.
     Alternatively, you can specify that the whole dump should be
     restored as a single transaction, so the restore is either fully
     completed or fully rolled back. This mode can be specified by
     passing the <option>-1</> or <option>--single-transaction</>
     command-line options to <application>psql</>. When using this
-    mode, be aware that even the smallest of errors can rollback a
+    mode, be aware that even a minor error can rollback a
     restore that has already run for many hours. However, that might
     still be preferable to manually cleaning up a complex database
     after a partially restored dump.
@@ -197,11 +196,11 @@ pg_dumpall &gt; <replaceable>outfile</>
 psql -f <replaceable class="parameter">infile</replaceable> postgres
 </synopsis>
     (Actually, you can specify any existing database name to start from,
-    but if you are reloading into an empty cluster then <literal>postgres</>
+    but if you are loading into an empty cluster then <literal>postgres</>
     should usually be used.)  It is always necessary to have
     database superuser access when restoring a <application>pg_dumpall</>
     dump, as that is required to restore the role and tablespace information.
-    If you use tablespaces, be careful that the tablespace paths in the
+    If you use tablespaces, make sure that the tablespace paths in the
     dump are appropriate for the new installation.
    </para>
 
@@ -218,13 +217,11 @@ psql -f <replaceable class="parameter">infile</replaceable> postgres
    <title>Handling large databases</title>
 
    <para>
-    Since <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> allows tables larger
-    than the maximum file size on your system, it can be problematic
-    to dump such a table to a file, since the resulting file will likely
-    be larger than the maximum size allowed by your system. Since
-    <application>pg_dump</> can write to the standard output, you can
-    use standard Unix tools to work around this possible problem.
-    There are several ways to do it:
+    Some operating systems have maximum file size limits that cause
+    problems when creating large <application>pg_dump</> output files.
+    Fortunately, <application>pg_dump</> can write to the standard
+    output, so you can use standard Unix tools to work around this
+    potential problem.  There are several possible methods:
    </para>
 
    <formalpara>
@@ -255,7 +252,7 @@ cat <replaceable class="parameter">filename</replaceable>.gz | gunzip | psql <re
     <title>Use <command>split</>.</title>
     <para>
      The <command>split</command> command
-     allows you to split the output into pieces that are
+     allows you to split the output into smaller files that are
      acceptable in size to the underlying file system. For example, to
      make chunks of 1 megabyte:
 
@@ -310,11 +307,10 @@ pg_restore -d <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable> <replaceable c
 
   <para>
    An alternative backup strategy is to directly copy the files that
-   <productname>PostgreSQL</> uses to store the data in the database. In
-   <xref linkend="creating-cluster"> it is explained where these files
-   are located, but you have probably found them already if you are
-   interested in this method. You can use whatever method you prefer
-   for doing usual file system backups, for example:
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</> uses to store the data in the database;
+   <xref linkend="creating-cluster"> explains where these files
+   are located.  You can use whatever method you prefer
+   for doing file system backups; for example:
 
 <programlisting>
 tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
@@ -336,7 +332,7 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
       an atomic snapshot of the state of the file system,
       but also because of internal buffering within the server).
       Information about stopping the server can be found in
-      <xref linkend="server-shutdown">.  Needless to say that you
+      <xref linkend="server-shutdown">.  Needless to say, you
       also need to shut down the server before restoring the data.
      </para>
     </listitem>
@@ -347,8 +343,8 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
       database, you might be tempted to try to back up or restore only certain
       individual tables or databases from their respective files or
       directories. This will <emphasis>not</> work because the
-      information contained in these files contains only half the
-      truth. The other half is in the commit log files
+      information contained in these files is not usable without
+      the commit log files,
       <filename>pg_clog/*</filename>, which contain the commit status of
       all transactions. A table file is only usable with this
       information. Of course it is also impossible to restore only a
@@ -371,11 +367,11 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
    above) from the snapshot to a backup device, then release the frozen
    snapshot.  This will work even while the database server is running.
    However, a backup created in this way saves
-   the database files in a state where the database server was not
+   the database files in a state as if the database server was not
    properly shut down; therefore, when you start the database server
-   on the backed-up data, it will think the previous server instance had
-   crashed and replay the WAL log.  This is not a problem, just be aware of
-   it (and be sure to include the WAL files in your backup).
+   on the backed-up data, it will think the previous server instance
+   crashed and will replay the WAL log.  This is not a problem; just
+   be aware of it (and be sure to include the WAL files in your backup).
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -386,7 +382,7 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
    not be possible to use snapshot backup because the snapshots
    <emphasis>must</> be simultaneous.
    Read your file system documentation very carefully before trusting
-   to the consistent-snapshot technique in such situations.
+   the consistent-snapshot technique in such situations.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -411,9 +407,8 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   Note that a file system backup will not necessarily be
-   smaller than an SQL dump. On the contrary, it will most likely be
-   larger. (<application>pg_dump</application> does not need to dump
+   Note that a file system backup will typically be larger
+   than an SQL dump. (<application>pg_dump</application> does not need to dump
    the contents of indexes for example, just the commands to recreate
    them.)  However, taking a file system backup might be faster.
   </para>
@@ -437,31 +432,31 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
   <para>
    At all times, <productname>PostgreSQL</> maintains a
    <firstterm>write ahead log</> (WAL) in the <filename>pg_xlog/</>
-   subdirectory of the cluster's data directory. The log describes
+   subdirectory of the cluster's data directory. The log records
    every change made to the database's data files.  This log exists
    primarily for crash-safety purposes: if the system crashes, the
    database can be restored to consistency by <quote>replaying</> the
    log entries made since the last checkpoint.  However, the existence
    of the log makes it possible to use a third strategy for backing up
    databases: we can combine a file-system-level backup with backup of
-   the WAL files.  If recovery is needed, we restore the backup and
-   then replay from the backed-up WAL files to bring the backup up to
-   current time.  This approach is more complex to administer than
+   the WAL files.  If recovery is needed, we restore the file system backup and
+   then replay from the backed-up WAL files to bring the system to a
+   current state.  This approach is more complex to administer than
    either of the previous approaches, but it has some significant
    benefits:
   <itemizedlist>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     We do not need a perfectly consistent backup as the starting point.
+     We do not need a perfectly consistent file system backup as the starting point.
      Any internal inconsistency in the backup will be corrected by log
      replay (this is not significantly different from what happens during
-     crash recovery).  So we don't need file system snapshot capability,
+     crash recovery).  So we do not need a file system snapshot capability,
      just <application>tar</> or a similar archiving tool.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     Since we can string together an indefinitely long sequence of WAL files
+     Since we can combine an indefinitely long sequence of WAL files
      for replay, continuous backup can be achieved simply by continuing to archive
      the WAL files.  This is particularly valuable for large databases, where
      it might not be convenient to take a full backup frequently.
@@ -469,7 +464,7 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     There is nothing that says we have to replay the WAL entries all the
+     It is not necessary to replay the WAL entries all the
      way to the end.  We could stop the replay at any point and have a
      consistent snapshot of the database as it was at that time.  Thus,
      this technique supports <firstterm>point-in-time recovery</>: it is
@@ -521,8 +516,8 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
     abstract WAL sequence.  When not using WAL archiving, the system
     normally creates just a few segment files and then
     <quote>recycles</> them by renaming no-longer-needed segment files
-    to higher segment numbers.  It's assumed that a segment file whose
-    contents precede the checkpoint-before-last is no longer of
+    to higher segment numbers.  It's assumed that segment files whose
+    contents precede the checkpoint-before-last are no longer of
     interest and can be recycled.
    </para>
 
@@ -535,7 +530,7 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
     directory on another machine, write them onto a tape drive (ensuring that
     you have a way of identifying the original name of each file), or batch
     them together and burn them onto CDs, or something else entirely.  To
-    provide the database administrator with as much flexibility as possible,
+    provide the database administrator with flexibility,
     <productname>PostgreSQL</> tries not to make any assumptions about how
     the archiving will be done.  Instead, <productname>PostgreSQL</> lets
     the administrator specify a shell command to be executed to copy a
@@ -552,11 +547,11 @@ tar -cf backup.tar /usr/local/pgsql/data
     these settings will always be placed in the
     <filename>postgresql.conf</filename> file.
     In <varname>archive_command</>,
-    any <literal>%p</> is replaced by the path name of the file to
-    archive, while any <literal>%f</> is replaced by the file name only.
+    <literal>%p</> is replaced by the path name of the file to
+    archive, while <literal>%f</> is replaced by only the file name.
     (The path name is relative to the current working directory,
     i.e., the cluster's data directory.)
-    Write <literal>%%</> if you need to embed an actual <literal>%</>
+    Use <literal>%%</> if you need to embed an actual <literal>%</>
     character in the command.  The simplest useful command is something
     like:
 <programlisting>
@@ -584,7 +579,7 @@ cp -i pg_xlog/00000001000000A900000065 /mnt/server/archivedir/00000001000000A900
 
    <para>
     It is important that the archive command return zero exit status if and
-    only if it succeeded.  Upon getting a zero result,
+    only if it succeeds.  Upon getting a zero result,
     <productname>PostgreSQL</> will assume that the file has been
     successfully archived, and will remove or recycle it.  However, a nonzero
     status tells <productname>PostgreSQL</> that the file was not archived;
@@ -602,7 +597,7 @@ cp -i pg_xlog/00000001000000A900000065 /mnt/server/archivedir/00000001000000A900
     nonzero status in this case</>.  We have found that <literal>cp -i</> does
     this correctly on some platforms but not others.  If the chosen command
     does not itself handle this case correctly, you should add a command
-    to test for pre-existence of the archive file.  For example, something
+    to test for existence of the archive file.  For example, something
     like:
 <programlisting>
 archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
@@ -620,14 +615,14 @@ archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
     is reported appropriately so that the situation can be
     resolved reasonably quickly. The <filename>pg_xlog/</> directory will
     continue to fill with WAL segment files until the situation is resolved.
-    (If the filesystem containing <filename>pg_xlog/</> fills up,
-    <productname>PostgreSQL</> will do a PANIC shutdown.  No prior
-    transactions will be lost, but the database will be unavailable until
+    (If the file system containing <filename>pg_xlog/</> fills up,
+    <productname>PostgreSQL</> will do a PANIC shutdown.  No committed
+    transactions will be lost, but the database will remain offline until
     you free some space.)
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    The speed of the archiving command is not important, so long as it can keep up
+    The speed of the archiving command is unimportant as long as it can keep up
     with the average rate at which your server generates WAL data.  Normal
     operation continues even if the archiving process falls a little behind.
     If archiving falls significantly behind, this will increase the amount of
@@ -642,8 +637,8 @@ archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
     In writing your archive command, you should assume that the file names to
     be archived can be up to 64 characters long and can contain any
     combination of ASCII letters, digits, and dots.  It is not necessary to
-    remember the original relative path (<literal>%p</>) but it is necessary to
-    remember the file name (<literal>%f</>).
+    preserve the original relative path (<literal>%p</>) but it is necessary to
+    preserve the file name (<literal>%f</>).
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -667,7 +662,7 @@ archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
     a limit on how old unarchived data can be, you can set
     <xref linkend="guc-archive-timeout"> to force the server to switch
     to a new WAL segment file at least that often.  Note that archived
-    files that are ended early due to a forced switch are still the same
+    files that are archived early due to a forced switch are still the same
     length as completely full files.  It is therefore unwise to set a very
     short <varname>archive_timeout</> &mdash; it will bloat your archive
     storage.  <varname>archive_timeout</> settings of a minute or so are
@@ -676,7 +671,7 @@ archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
 
    <para>
     Also, you can force a segment switch manually with
-    <function>pg_switch_xlog</>, if you want to ensure that a
+    <function>pg_switch_xlog</> if you want to ensure that a
     just-finished transaction is archived as soon as possible.  Other utility
     functions related to WAL management are listed in <xref
     linkend="functions-admin-backup-table">.
@@ -711,7 +706,7 @@ archive_command = 'test ! -f .../%f &amp;&amp; cp %p .../%f'
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     Connect to the database as a superuser, and issue the command:
+     Connect to the database as a superuser and issue the command:
 <programlisting>
 SELECT pg_start_backup('label');
 </programlisting>
@@ -720,7 +715,8 @@ SELECT pg_start_backup('label');
      full path where you intend to put the backup dump file.)
      <function>pg_start_backup</> creates a <firstterm>backup label</> file,
      called <filename>backup_label</>, in the cluster directory with
-     information about your backup.
+     information about your backup, including the start time and label
+     string.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -735,9 +731,9 @@ SELECT pg_start_backup('label');
      required for the checkpoint will be spread out over a significant
      period of time, by default half your inter-checkpoint interval
      (see the configuration parameter
-     <xref linkend="guc-checkpoint-completion-target">).  Usually
-     this is what you want, because it minimizes the impact on query
-     processing.  If you just want to start the backup as soon as
+     <xref linkend="guc-checkpoint-completion-target">).  This is
+     usually what you want, because it minimizes the impact on query
+     processing.  If you want to start the backup as soon as
      possible, use:
 <programlisting>
 SELECT pg_start_backup('label', true);
@@ -760,14 +756,14 @@ SELECT pg_start_backup('label', true);
 SELECT pg_stop_backup();
 </programlisting>
      This terminates the backup mode and performs an automatic switch to
-     the next WAL segment.  The reason for the switch is to arrange that
-     the last WAL segment file written during the backup interval is
-     immediately ready to archive.
+     the next WAL segment.  The reason for the switch is to arrange for
+     the last WAL segment file written during the backup interval to be
+     ready to archive.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     Once the WAL segment files used during the backup are archived, you are
+     Once the WAL segment files active during the backup are archived, you are
      done.  The file identified by <function>pg_stop_backup</>'s result is
      the last segment that is required to form a complete set of backup files.
      <function>pg_stop_backup</> does not return until the last segment has
@@ -788,10 +784,10 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    Some backup tools that you might wish to use emit warnings or errors
+    Some file system backup tools emit warnings or errors
     if the files they are trying to copy change while the copy proceeds.
-    This situation is normal, and not an error, when taking a base backup
-    of an active database; so you need to ensure that you can distinguish
+    When taking a base backup of an active database, this situation is normal
+    and not an error.  However, you need to ensure that you can distinguish
     complaints of this sort from real errors.  For example, some versions
     of <application>rsync</> return a separate exit code for
     <quote>vanished source files</>, and you can write a driver script to
@@ -804,7 +800,7 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    It is not necessary to be very concerned about the amount of time elapsed
+    It is not necessary to be concerned about the amount of time elapsed
     between <function>pg_start_backup</> and the start of the actual backup,
     nor between the end of the backup and <function>pg_stop_backup</>; a
     few minutes' delay won't hurt anything.  (However, if you normally run the
@@ -812,23 +808,23 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
     in performance between <function>pg_start_backup</> and
     <function>pg_stop_backup</>, since <varname>full_page_writes</> is
     effectively forced on during backup mode.)  You must ensure that these
-    steps are carried out in sequence without any possible
+    steps are carried out in sequence, without any possible
     overlap, or you will invalidate the backup.
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    Be certain that your backup dump includes all of the files underneath
+    Be certain that your backup dump includes all of the files under
     the database cluster directory (e.g., <filename>/usr/local/pgsql/data</>).
     If you are using tablespaces that do not reside underneath this directory,
     be careful to include them as well (and be sure that your backup dump
-    archives symbolic links as links, otherwise the restore will mess up
+    archives symbolic links as links, otherwise the restore will corrupt
     your tablespaces).
    </para>
 
    <para>
     You can, however, omit from the backup dump the files within the
-    <filename>pg_xlog/</> subdirectory of the cluster directory.  This
-    slight complication is worthwhile because it reduces the risk
+    cluster's <filename>pg_xlog/</> subdirectory.  This
+    slight adjustment is worthwhile because it reduces the risk
     of mistakes when restoring.  This is easy to arrange if
     <filename>pg_xlog/</> is a symbolic link pointing to someplace outside
     the cluster directory, which is a common setup anyway for performance
@@ -836,12 +832,12 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    To make use of the backup, you will need to keep around all the WAL
+    To make use of the backup, you will need to keep all the WAL
     segment files generated during and after the file system backup.
     To aid you in doing this, the <function>pg_stop_backup</> function
     creates a <firstterm>backup history file</> that is immediately
     stored into the WAL archive area. This file is named after the first
-    WAL segment file that you need to have to make use of the backup.
+    WAL segment file that you need for the file system backup.
     For example, if the starting WAL file is
     <literal>0000000100001234000055CD</> the backup history file will be
     named something like
@@ -860,9 +856,9 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
     The backup history file is just a small text file. It contains the
     label string you gave to <function>pg_start_backup</>, as well as
     the starting and ending times and WAL segments of the backup.
-    If you used the label to identify where the associated dump file is kept,
+    If you used the label to identify the associated dump file,
     then the archived history file is enough to tell you which dump file to
-    restore, should you need to do so.
+    restore.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -878,13 +874,13 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
    <para>
     It's also worth noting that the <function>pg_start_backup</> function
     makes a file named <filename>backup_label</> in the database cluster
-    directory, which is then removed again by <function>pg_stop_backup</>.
+    directory, which is removed by <function>pg_stop_backup</>.
     This file will of course be archived as a part of your backup dump file.
     The backup label file includes the label string you gave to
     <function>pg_start_backup</>, as well as the time at which
     <function>pg_start_backup</> was run, and the name of the starting WAL
-    file.  In case of confusion it will
-    therefore be possible to look inside a backup dump file and determine
+    file.  In case of confusion it is
+    therefore possible to look inside a backup dump file and determine
     exactly which backup session the dump file came from.
    </para>
 
@@ -917,20 +913,20 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
      location in case you need them later. Note that this precaution will
      require that you have enough free space on your system to hold two
      copies of your existing database. If you do not have enough space,
-     you need at the least to copy the contents of the <filename>pg_xlog</>
-     subdirectory of the cluster data directory, as it might contain logs which
+     you should at least save the contents of the cluster's <filename>pg_xlog</>
+     subdirectory, as it might contain logs which
      were not archived before the system went down.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     Clean out all existing files and subdirectories under the cluster data
+     Remove all existing files and subdirectories under the cluster data
      directory and under the root directories of any tablespaces you are using.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     Restore the database files from your base backup.  Be careful that they
+     Restore the database files from your file system backup.  Be sure that they
      are restored with the right ownership (the database system user, not
      <literal>root</>!) and with the right permissions.  If you are using
      tablespaces,
@@ -941,17 +937,18 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
    <listitem>
     <para>
      Remove any files present in <filename>pg_xlog/</>; these came from the
-     backup dump and are therefore probably obsolete rather than current.
-     If you didn't archive <filename>pg_xlog/</> at all, then recreate it,
+     file system backup and are therefore probably obsolete rather than current.
+     If you didn't archive <filename>pg_xlog/</> at all, then recreate
+     it with proper permissions,
      being careful to ensure that you re-establish it as a symbolic link
      if you had it set up that way before.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     If you had unarchived WAL segment files that you saved in step 2,
+     If you have unarchived WAL segment files that you saved in step 2,
      copy them into <filename>pg_xlog/</>.  (It is best to copy them,
-     not move them, so that you still have the unmodified files if a
+     not move them, so you still have the unmodified files if a
      problem occurs and you have to start over.)
     </para>
    </listitem>
@@ -960,7 +957,7 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
      Create a recovery command file <filename>recovery.conf</> in the cluster
      data directory (see <xref linkend="recovery-config-settings">). You might
      also want to temporarily modify <filename>pg_hba.conf</> to prevent
-     ordinary users from connecting until you are sure the recovery has worked.
+     ordinary users from connecting until you are sure the recovery was successful.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
@@ -971,28 +968,28 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
      simply be restarted and it will continue recovery.  Upon completion
      of the recovery process, the server will rename
      <filename>recovery.conf</> to <filename>recovery.done</> (to prevent
-     accidentally re-entering recovery mode in case of a crash later) and then
+     accidentally re-entering recovery mode later) and then
      commence normal database operations.
     </para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
     <para>
      Inspect the contents of the database to ensure you have recovered to
-     where you want to be.  If not, return to step 1.  If all is well,
-     let in your users by restoring <filename>pg_hba.conf</> to normal.
+     the desired state.  If not, return to step 1.  If all is well,
+     allow your users to connect by restoring <filename>pg_hba.conf</> to normal.
     </para>
    </listitem>
   </orderedlist>
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    The key part of all this is to set up a recovery command file that
+    The key part of all this is to set up a recovery configuration file that
     describes how you want to recover and how far the recovery should
     run.  You can use <filename>recovery.conf.sample</> (normally
-    installed in the installation <filename>share/</> directory) as a
+    located in the installation's <filename>share/</> directory) as a
     prototype.  The one thing that you absolutely must specify in
     <filename>recovery.conf</> is the <varname>restore_command</>,
-    which tells <productname>PostgreSQL</> how to get back archived
+    which tells <productname>PostgreSQL</> how to retrieve archived
     WAL file segments.  Like the <varname>archive_command</>, this is
     a shell command string.  It can contain <literal>%f</>, which is
     replaced by the name of the desired log file, and <literal>%p</>,
@@ -1006,14 +1003,14 @@ SELECT pg_stop_backup();
 restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
 </programlisting>
     which will copy previously archived WAL segments from the directory
-    <filename>/mnt/server/archivedir</>.  You could of course use something
+    <filename>/mnt/server/archivedir</>.  Of course, you can use something
     much more complicated, perhaps even a shell script that requests the
     operator to mount an appropriate tape.
    </para>
 
    <para>
     It is important that the command return nonzero exit status on failure.
-    The command <emphasis>will</> be asked for files that are not present
+    The command <emphasis>will</> be called requesting files that are not present
     in the archive; it must return nonzero when so asked.  This is not an
     error condition.  Not all of the requested files will be WAL segment
     files; you should also expect requests for files with a suffix of
@@ -1025,7 +1022,7 @@ restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
    <para>
     WAL segments that cannot be found in the archive will be sought in
     <filename>pg_xlog/</>; this allows use of recent un-archived segments.
-    However segments that are available from the archive will be used in
+    However, segments that are available from the archive will be used in
     preference to files in <filename>pg_xlog/</>.  The system will not
     overwrite the existing contents of <filename>pg_xlog/</> when retrieving
     archived files.
@@ -1034,13 +1031,13 @@ restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
    <para>
     Normally, recovery will proceed through all available WAL segments,
     thereby restoring the database to the current point in time (or as
-    close as we can get given the available WAL segments).  So a normal
+    close as possible given the available WAL segments).  Therefore, a normal
     recovery will end with a <quote>file not found</> message, the exact text
     of the error message depending upon your choice of
     <varname>restore_command</>.  You may also see an error message
     at the start of recovery for a file named something like
     <filename>00000001.history</>.  This is also normal and does not
-    indicate a problem in simple recovery situations. See
+    indicate a problem in simple recovery situations; see
     <xref linkend="backup-timelines"> for discussion.
    </para>
 
@@ -1058,15 +1055,15 @@ restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
      <para>
       The stop point must be after the ending time of the base backup, i.e.,
       the end time of <function>pg_stop_backup</>.  You cannot use a base backup
-      to recover to a time when that backup was still going on.  (To
+      to recover to a time when that backup was in progress.  (To
       recover to such a time, you must go back to your previous base backup
       and roll forward from there.)
      </para>
    </note>
 
    <para>
-    If recovery finds a corruption in the WAL data then recovery will
-    complete at that point and the server will not start. In such a case the
+    If recovery finds corrupted WAL data, recovery will
+    halt at that point and the server will not start. In such a case the
     recovery process could be re-run from the beginning, specifying a
     <quote>recovery target</> before the point of corruption so that recovery
     can complete normally.
@@ -1085,7 +1082,9 @@ restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
 
      <para>
       These settings can only be made in the <filename>recovery.conf</>
-      file, and apply only for the duration of the recovery. They must be
+      file, and apply only for the duration of the recovery.  (A sample file,
+      <filename>share/recovery.conf.sample</>, exists in the installation's
+      <filename>share/</> directory.)  They must be
       reset for any subsequent recovery you wish to perform. They cannot be
       changed once recovery has begun.
       The parameters for streaming replication are described in <xref
@@ -1103,22 +1102,22 @@ restore_command = 'cp /mnt/server/archivedir/%f %p'
         but optional for streaming replication.
         Any <literal>%f</> in the string is
         replaced by the name of the file to retrieve from the archive,
-        and any <literal>%p</> is replaced by the path name to copy
-        it to on the server.
+        and any <literal>%p</> is replaced by the copy destination path name
+        on the server.
         (The path name is relative to the current working directory,
         i.e., the cluster's data directory.)
         Any <literal>%r</> is replaced by the name of the file containing the
         last valid restart point. That is the earliest file that must be kept
         to allow a restore to be restartable, so this information can be used
         to truncate the archive to just the minimum required to support
-        restart from the current restore. <literal>%r</> would typically be
-        used in a warm-standby configuration
+        restarting from the current restore. <literal>%r</> is typically only
+        used by warm-standby configurations
         (see <xref linkend="warm-standby">).
-        Write <literal>%%</> to embed an actual <literal>%</> character
-        in the command.
+        Write <literal>%%</> to embed an actual <literal>%</> character.
        </para>
+
        <para>
-        It is important for the command to return a zero exit status if and
+        It is important for the command to return a zero exit status
         only if it succeeds.  The command <emphasis>will</> be asked for file
         names that are not present in the archive; it must return nonzero
         when so asked.  Examples:
@@ -1221,7 +1220,7 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"'  # Windows
        <para>
         Specifies recovering into a particular timeline.  The default is
         to recover along the same timeline that was current when the
-        base backup was taken.  You would only need to set this parameter
+        base backup was taken.  You only need to set this parameter
         in complex re-recovery situations, where you need to return to
         a state that itself was reached after a point-in-time recovery.
         See <xref linkend="backup-timelines"> for discussion.
@@ -1245,28 +1244,28 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"'  # Windows
    <para>
     The ability to restore the database to a previous point in time creates
     some complexities that are akin to science-fiction stories about time
-    travel and parallel universes.  In the original history of the database,
-    perhaps you dropped a critical table at 5:15PM on Tuesday evening, but
+    travel and parallel universes.  For example, in the original history of the database,
+    suppose you dropped a critical table at 5:15PM on Tuesday evening, but
     didn't realize your mistake until Wednesday noon.
     Unfazed, you get out your backup, restore to the point-in-time 5:14PM
     Tuesday evening, and are up and running.  In <emphasis>this</> history of
-    the database universe, you never dropped the table at all.  But suppose
-    you later realize this wasn't such a great idea after all, and would like
+    the database universe, you never dropped the table.  But suppose
+    you later realize this wasn't such a great idea, and would like
     to return to sometime Wednesday morning in the original history.
     You won't be able
     to if, while your database was up-and-running, it overwrote some of the
-    sequence of WAL segment files that led up to the time you now wish you
-    could get back to.  So you really want to distinguish the series of
+    WAL segment files that led up to the time you now wish you
+    could get back to.  Thus, to avoid this, you need to distinguish the series of
     WAL records generated after you've done a point-in-time recovery from
     those that were generated in the original database history.
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    To deal with these problems, <productname>PostgreSQL</> has a notion
-    of <firstterm>timelines</>.  Whenever an archive recovery is completed,
+    To deal with this problem, <productname>PostgreSQL</> has a notion
+    of <firstterm>timelines</>.  Whenever an archive recovery completes,
     a new timeline is created to identify the series of WAL records
     generated after that recovery.  The timeline
-    ID number is part of WAL segment file names, and so a new timeline does
+    ID number is part of WAL segment file names so a new timeline does
     not overwrite the WAL data generated by previous timelines.  It is
     in fact possible to archive many different timelines.  While that might
     seem like a useless feature, it's often a lifesaver.  Consider the
@@ -1275,11 +1274,11 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"'  # Windows
     until you find the best place to branch off from the old history.  Without
     timelines this process would soon generate an unmanageable mess.  With
     timelines, you can recover to <emphasis>any</> prior state, including
-    states in timeline branches that you later abandoned.
+    states in timeline branches that you abandoned earlier.
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    Each time a new timeline is created, <productname>PostgreSQL</> creates
+    Every time a new timeline is created, <productname>PostgreSQL</> creates
     a <quote>timeline history</> file that shows which timeline it branched
     off from and when.  These history files are necessary to allow the system
     to pick the right WAL segment files when recovering from an archive that
@@ -1287,15 +1286,15 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"'  # Windows
     archive area just like WAL segment files.  The history files are just
     small text files, so it's cheap and appropriate to keep them around
     indefinitely (unlike the segment files which are large).  You can, if
-    you like, add comments to a history file to make your own notes about
-    how and why this particular timeline came to be.  Such comments will be
+    you like, add comments to a history file to record your own notes about
+    how and why this particular timeline was created.  Such comments will be
     especially valuable when you have a thicket of different timelines as
     a result of experimentation.
    </para>
 
    <para>
     The default behavior of recovery is to recover along the same timeline
-    that was current when the base backup was taken.  If you want to recover
+    that was current when the base backup was taken.  If you wish to recover
     into some child timeline (that is, you want to return to some state that
     was itself generated after a recovery attempt), you need to specify the
     target timeline ID in <filename>recovery.conf</>.  You cannot recover into
@@ -1319,13 +1318,13 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"'  # Windows
       for point-in-time recovery, yet are typically much faster to backup and
       restore than <application>pg_dump</> dumps.  (They are also much larger
       than <application>pg_dump</> dumps, so in some cases the speed advantage
-      could be negated.)
+      might be negated.)
      </para>
 
      <para>
       To prepare for standalone hot backups, set <varname>archive_mode</> to
       <literal>on</>, and set up an <varname>archive_command</> that performs
-      archiving only when a <quote>switch file</> exists.  For example:
+      archiving only when a <emphasis>switch file</> exists.  For example:
 <programlisting>
 archive_command = 'test ! -f /var/lib/pgsql/backup_in_progress || cp -i %p /var/lib/pgsql/archive/%f &lt; /dev/null'
 </programlisting>
@@ -1538,7 +1537,7 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
    in continuous archiving mode, while each standby server operates in
    continuous recovery mode, reading the WAL files from the primary. No
    changes to the database tables are required to enable this capability,
-   so it offers low administration overhead in comparison with some other
+   so it offers low administration overhead compared to some other
    replication approaches. This configuration also has relatively low
    performance impact on the primary server.
   </para>
@@ -1549,7 +1548,7 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
    implements file-based log shipping, which means that WAL records are
    transferred one file (WAL segment) at a time. WAL files (16MB) can be
    shipped easily and cheaply over any distance, whether it be to an
-   adjacent system, another system on the same site or another system on
+   adjacent system, another system at the same site, or another system on
    the far side of the globe. The bandwidth required for this technique
    varies according to the transaction rate of the primary server.
    Record-based log shipping is also possible with custom-developed
@@ -1563,10 +1562,10 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
    failure: transactions not yet shipped will be lost.  The length of the
    window of data loss can be limited by use of the
    <varname>archive_timeout</varname> parameter, which can be set as low
-   as a few seconds if required.  However such low settings will
-   substantially increase the bandwidth requirements for file shipping.
+   as a few seconds if required.  However such a low setting will
+   substantially increase the bandwidth required for file shipping.
    If you need a window of less than a minute or so, it's probably better
-   to look into record-based log shipping.
+   to consider record-based log shipping.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -1587,12 +1586,12 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
     It is usually wise to create the primary and standby servers
     so that they are as similar as possible, at least from the
     perspective of the database server.  In particular, the path names
-    associated with tablespaces will be passed across as-is, so both
+    associated with tablespaces will be passed across unmodified, so both
     primary and standby servers must have the same mount paths for
     tablespaces if that feature is used.  Keep in mind that if
     <xref linkend="sql-createtablespace" endterm="sql-createtablespace-title">
     is executed on the primary, any new mount point needed for it must
-    be created on both the primary and all standby servers before the command
+    be created on the primary and all standby servers before the command
     is executed. Hardware need not be exactly the same, but experience shows
     that maintaining two identical systems is easier than maintaining two
     dissimilar ones over the lifetime of the application and system.
@@ -1603,7 +1602,7 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
    <para>
     In general, log shipping between servers running different major
     <productname>PostgreSQL</> release
-    levels will not be possible. It is the policy of the PostgreSQL Global
+    levels is not possible. It is the policy of the PostgreSQL Global
     Development Group not to make changes to disk formats during minor release
     upgrades, so it is likely that running different minor release levels
     on primary and standby servers will work successfully. However, no
@@ -1617,13 +1616,13 @@ archive_command = 'local_backup_script.sh'
 
    <para>
     There is no special mode required to enable a standby server. The
-    operations that occur on both primary and standby servers are entirely
+    operations that occur on both primary and standby servers are
     normal continuous archiving and recovery tasks. The only point of
     contact between the two database servers is the archive of WAL files
     that both share: primary writing to the archive, standby reading from
-    the archive. Care must be taken to ensure that WAL archives for separate
+    the archive. Care must be taken to ensure that WAL archives from separate
     primary servers do not become mixed together or confused. The archive
-    need not be large, if it is only required for the standby operation.
+    need not be large if it is only required for standby operation.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -1665,31 +1664,31 @@ if (!triggered)
     as a <filename>contrib</> module named <application>pg_standby</>. It
     should be used as a reference on how to correctly implement the logic
     described above. It can also be extended as needed to support specific
-    configurations or environments.
+    configurations and environments.
    </para>
 
    <para>
     <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> does not provide the system
     software required to identify a failure on the primary and notify
-    the standby system and then the standby database server. Many such
-    tools exist and are well integrated with other aspects required for
+    the standby database server.  Many such tools exist and are well
+    integrated with the operating system facilities required for
     successful failover, such as IP address migration.
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    The means for triggering failover is an important part of planning and
-    design. The <varname>restore_command</> is executed in full once
-    for each WAL file. The process running the <varname>restore_command</>
-    is therefore created and dies for each file, so there is no daemon
-    or server process and so we cannot use signals and a signal
-    handler. A more permanent notification is required to trigger the
-    failover. It is possible to use a simple timeout facility,
-    especially if used in conjunction with a known
-    <varname>archive_timeout</> setting on the primary. This is
-    somewhat error prone since a network problem or busy primary server might
-    be sufficient to initiate failover. A notification mechanism such
-    as the explicit creation of a trigger file is less error prone, if
-    this can be arranged.
+    The method for triggering failover is an important part of planning
+    and design. One potential option is the <varname>restore_command</>
+    command.  It is executed once for each WAL file, but the process
+    running the <varname>restore_command</> is created and dies for
+    each file, so there is no daemon or server process, and we cannot
+    use signals or a signal handler. Therefore, the
+    <varname>restore_command</> is not suitable to trigger failover.
+    It is possible to use a simple timeout facility, especially if
+    used in conjunction with a known <varname>archive_timeout</>
+    setting on the primary. However, this is somewhat error prone
+    since a network problem or busy primary server might be sufficient
+    to initiate failover. A notification mechanism such as the explicit
+    creation of a trigger file is ideal, if this can be arranged.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -1697,7 +1696,7 @@ if (!triggered)
     option of the <varname>restore_command</>. This option specifies the
     last archive file name that needs to be kept to allow the recovery to
     restart correctly. This can be used to truncate the archive once
-    files are no longer required, if the archive is writable from the
+    files are no longer required, assuming the archive is writable from the
     standby server.
    </para>
   </sect2>
@@ -1711,15 +1710,15 @@ if (!triggered)
     <orderedlist>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       Set up primary and standby systems as near identically as
+       Set up primary and standby systems as nearly identical as
        possible, including two identical copies of
        <productname>PostgreSQL</> at the same release level.
       </para>
      </listitem>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       Set up continuous archiving from the primary to a WAL archive located
-       in a directory on the standby server. Ensure that
+       Set up continuous archiving from the primary to a WAL archive
+       directory on the standby server. Ensure that
        <xref linkend="guc-archive-mode">,
        <xref linkend="guc-archive-command"> and
        <xref linkend="guc-archive-timeout">
@@ -1777,9 +1776,10 @@ if (!triggered)
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    If the primary server fails and then immediately restarts, you must have
-    a mechanism for informing it that it is no longer the primary. This is
-    sometimes known as STONITH (Shoot the Other Node In The Head), which is
+    If the primary server fails and the standby server becomes the
+    new primary, and then the old primary restarts, you must have
+    a mechanism for informing old primary that it is no longer the primary. This is
+    sometimes known as STONITH (Shoot The Other Node In The Head), which is
     necessary to avoid situations where both systems think they are the
     primary, which will lead to confusion and ultimately data loss.
    </para>
@@ -1803,7 +1803,7 @@ if (!triggered)
     either on the former primary system when it comes up, or on a third,
     possibly new, system. Once complete the primary and standby can be
     considered to have switched roles. Some people choose to use a third
-    server to provide backup to the new primary until the new standby
+    server to provide backup for the new primary until the new standby
     server is recreated,
     though clearly this complicates the system configuration and
     operational processes.
@@ -1834,15 +1834,15 @@ if (!triggered)
     to find out the file name and the exact byte offset within it of
     the current end of WAL.  It can then access the WAL file directly
     and copy the data from the last known end of WAL through the current end
-    over to the standby server(s).  With this approach, the window for data
+    over to the standby servers.  With this approach, the window for data
     loss is the polling cycle time of the copying program, which can be very
-    small, but there is no wasted bandwidth from forcing partially-used
+    small, and there is no wasted bandwidth from forcing partially-used
     segment files to be archived.  Note that the standby servers'
-    <varname>restore_command</> scripts still deal in whole WAL files,
+    <varname>restore_command</> scripts can only deal with whole WAL files,
     so the incrementally copied data is not ordinarily made available to
     the standby servers.  It is of use only when the primary dies &mdash;
     then the last partial WAL file is fed to the standby before allowing
-    it to come up.  So correct implementation of this process requires
+    it to come up.  The correct implementation of this process requires
     cooperation of the <varname>restore_command</> script with the data
     copying program.
    </para>
@@ -2090,10 +2090,11 @@ primary_conninfo = 'host=192.168.1.50 port=5432 user=foo password=foopass'
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    If we take a backup of the standby server's data directory while it is processing
-    logs shipped from the primary, we will be able to reload that data and
+    If we take a file system backup of the standby server's data
+    directory while it is processing
+    logs shipped from the primary, we will be able to reload that backup and
     restart the standby's recovery process from the last restart point.
-    We no longer need to keep WAL files from before the restart point.
+    We no longer need to keep WAL files from before the standby's restart point.
     If we need to recover, it will be faster to recover from the incrementally
     updated backup than from the original base backup.
    </para>
@@ -2106,7 +2107,8 @@ primary_conninfo = 'host=192.168.1.50 port=5432 user=foo password=foopass'
     backup.  You can do this by running <application>pg_controldata</>
     on the standby server to inspect the control file and determine the
     current checkpoint WAL location, or by using the
-    <varname>log_checkpoints</> option to print values to the server log.
+    <varname>log_checkpoints</> option to print values to the standby's
+    server log.
    </para>
   </sect2>
  </sect1>
@@ -2892,27 +2894,35 @@ LOG:  database system is ready to accept read only connections
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   As a general rule, the internal data storage format is subject to
-   change between major releases of <productname>PostgreSQL</> (where
-   the number after the first dot changes). This does not apply to
-   different minor releases under the same major release (where the
-   number after the second dot changes); these always have compatible
-   storage formats. For example, releases 8.1.1, 8.2.3, and 8.3 are
-   not compatible, whereas 8.2.3 and 8.2.4 are. When you update
-   between compatible versions, you can simply replace the executables
-   and reuse the data directory on disk. Otherwise you need to back
-   up your data and restore it on the new server.  This has to be done
-   using <application>pg_dump</>; file system level backup methods
-   obviously won't work. There are checks in place that prevent you
-   from using a data directory with an incompatible version of
-   <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>, so no great harm can be done by
-   trying to start the wrong server version on a data directory.
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</> major versions are represented by the
+   first two digit groups of the version number, e.g. 8.4.
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</> minor versions are represented by the
+   the third group of version digits, i.e., 8.4.2 is the second minor
+   release of 8.4.  Minor releases never change the internal storage
+   format and are always compatible with earlier and later minor
+   releases of the same major version number, i.e. 8.4.2 is compatible
+   with 8.4, 8.4.1 and 8.4.6.  To update between compatible versions,
+   you simply replace the executables while the server is down and
+   restart the server.  The data directory remains unchanged &mdash;
+   minor upgrades are that simple.
+  </para>
+
+  <para>
+   For <emphasis>major</> releases of <productname>PostgreSQL</>, the
+   internal data storage format is subject to change.  When migrating
+   data from one major version of <productname>PostgreSQL</> to another,
+   you need to back up your data and restore it on the new server.
+   This must be done using <application>pg_dump</>; file system level
+   backup methods will not work. There are checks in place that prevent
+   you from using a data directory with an incompatible version of
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>, so no great harm can be done
+   by trying to start the wrong server version on a data directory.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    It is recommended that you use the <application>pg_dump</> and
    <application>pg_dumpall</> programs from the newer version of
-   <productname>PostgreSQL</>, to take advantage of any enhancements
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</>, to take advantage of enhancements
    that might have been made in these programs.  Current releases of the
    dump programs can read data from any server version back to 7.0.
   </para>
@@ -2926,9 +2936,9 @@ LOG:  database system is ready to accept read only connections
 pg_dumpall -p 5432 | psql -d postgres -p 6543
 </programlisting>
 
-   to transfer your data.  Or use an intermediate file if you want.
-   Then you can shut down the old server and start the new server at
-   the port the old one was running at. You should make sure that the
+   to transfer your data.  Or use an intermediate file if you wish.
+   Then you can shut down the old server and start the new server using
+   the port the old one was running on. You should make sure that the
    old database is not updated after you begin to run
    <application>pg_dumpall</>, otherwise you will lose that data. See <xref
    linkend="client-authentication"> for information on how to prohibit
@@ -2949,13 +2959,14 @@ pg_dumpall -p 5432 | psql -d postgres -p 6543
   <para>
    If you cannot or do not want to run two servers in parallel, you can
    do the backup step before installing the new version, bring down
-   the server, move the old version out of the way, install the new
+   the old server, move the old version out of the way, install the new
    version, start the new server, and restore the data. For example:
 
 <programlisting>
 pg_dumpall &gt; backup
 pg_ctl stop
 mv /usr/local/pgsql /usr/local/pgsql.old
+# Rename any tablespace directories as well
 cd ~/postgresql-&version;
 gmake install
 initdb -D /usr/local/pgsql/data
@@ -2976,7 +2987,7 @@ psql -f backup postgres
     This is usually not a big problem, but if you plan on using two
     installations in parallel for a while you should assign them
     different installation directories at build time.  (This problem
-    is rectified in <productname>PostgreSQL</> 8.0 and later, so long
+    is rectified in <productname>PostgreSQL</> version 8.0 and later, so long
     as you move all subdirectories containing installed files together;
     for example if <filename>/usr/local/postgres/bin/</> goes to
     <filename>/usr/local/postgres.old/bin/</>, then

doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml,v 2.219 2010/01/22 16:40:18 rhaas Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml,v 2.220 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 <!--
  Documentation of the system catalogs, directed toward PostgreSQL developers
  -->
@@ -5569,7 +5569,9 @@
        inserted before a datum of this type so that it begins on the
        specified boundary.  The alignment reference is the beginning
        of the first datum in the sequence.
-      </para><para>
+      </para>
+
+      <para>
        Possible values are:
        <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>

doc/src/sgml/charset.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/charset.sgml,v 2.95 2009/05/18 08:59:28 petere Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/charset.sgml,v 2.96 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="charset">
  <title>Localization</>
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
  <para>
   This chapter describes the available localization features from the
   point of view of the administrator.
-  <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> supports localization with
-  two approaches:
+  <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> supports two localization
+  facilities:
 
    <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -67,10 +67,10 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
     (<literal>sv</>) as spoken
     in Sweden (<literal>SE</>).  Other possibilities might be
     <literal>en_US</> (U.S. English) and <literal>fr_CA</> (French
-    Canadian).  If more than one character set can be useful for a
+    Canadian).  If more than one character set can be used for a
     locale then the specifications look like this:
-    <literal>cs_CZ.ISO8859-2</>. What locales are available under what
-    names on your system depends on what was provided by the operating
+    <literal>cs_CZ.ISO8859-2</>. What locales are available on your 
+    system under what names depends on what was provided by the operating
     system vendor and what was installed.  On most Unix systems, the command
     <literal>locale -a</> will provide a list of available locales.
     Windows uses more verbose locale names, such as <literal>German_Germany</>
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
    <para>
     Occasionally it is useful to mix rules from several locales, e.g.,
     use English collation rules but Spanish messages.  To support that, a
-    set of locale subcategories exist that control only a certain
-    aspect of the localization rules:
+    set of locale subcategories exist that control only certain
+    aspects of the localization rules:
 
     <informaltable>
      <tgroup cols="2">
@@ -127,13 +127,13 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    The nature of some locale categories is that their value has to be
+    Some locale categories must have their values
     fixed when the database is created.  You can use different settings
     for different databases, but once a database is created, you cannot
     change them for that database anymore. <literal>LC_COLLATE</literal>
-    and <literal>LC_CTYPE</literal> are these categories.  They affect
+    and <literal>LC_CTYPE</literal> are these type of categories.  They affect
     the sort order of indexes, so they must be kept fixed, or indexes on
-    text columns will become corrupt.  The default values for these
+    text columns would become corrupt.  The default values for these
     categories are determined when <command>initdb</command> is run, and
     those values are used when new databases are created, unless
     specified otherwise in the <command>CREATE DATABASE</command> command.
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
     linkend="runtime-config-client-format"> for details).  The values
     that are chosen by <command>initdb</command> are actually only written
     into the configuration file <filename>postgresql.conf</filename> to
-    serve as defaults when the server is started.  If you delete these
+    serve as defaults when the server is started.  If you disable these
     assignments from <filename>postgresql.conf</filename> then the
     server will inherit the settings from its execution environment.
    </para>
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
      settings for the purpose of setting the language of messages.  If
      in doubt, please refer to the documentation of your operating
      system, in particular the documentation about
-     <application>gettext</>, for more information.
+     <application>gettext</>.
     </para>
    </note>
 
@@ -320,8 +320,9 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
 
   <para>
    An important restriction, however, is that each database's character set
-   must be compatible with the database's <envar>LC_CTYPE</> and
-   <envar>LC_COLLATE</> locale settings. For <literal>C</> or
+   must be compatible with the database's <envar>LC_CTYPE</> (character
+   classification) and <envar>LC_COLLATE</> (string sort order) locale
+   settings. For <literal>C</> or
    <literal>POSIX</> locale, any character set is allowed, but for other
    locales there is only one character set that will work correctly.
    (On Windows, however, UTF-8 encoding can be used with any locale.)
@@ -543,7 +544,7 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
          <entry>LATIN1 with Euro and accents</entry>
          <entry>Yes</entry>
          <entry>1</entry>
-         <entry>ISO885915</entry>
+         <entry><literal>ISO885915</></entry>
         </row>
         <row>
          <entry><literal>LATIN10</literal></entry>
@@ -694,7 +695,7 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
      </table>
 
      <para>
-      Not all <acronym>API</>s support all the listed character sets. For example, the
+      Not all client <acronym>API</>s support all the listed character sets. For example, the
       <productname>PostgreSQL</>
       JDBC driver does not support <literal>MULE_INTERNAL</>, <literal>LATIN6</>,
       <literal>LATIN8</>, and <literal>LATIN10</>.
@@ -710,7 +711,7 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
       much a declaration that a specific encoding is in use, as a declaration
       of ignorance about the encoding.  In most cases, if you are
       working with any non-ASCII data, it is unwise to use the
-      <literal>SQL_ASCII</> setting, because
+      <literal>SQL_ASCII</> setting because
       <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> will be unable to help you by
       converting or validating non-ASCII characters.
      </para>
@@ -720,17 +721,17 @@ initdb --locale=sv_SE
     <title>Setting the Character Set</title>
 
     <para>
-     <command>initdb</> defines the default character set
+     <command>initdb</> defines the default character set (encoding)
      for a <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> cluster. For example,
 
 <screen>
 initdb -E EUC_JP
 </screen>
 
-     sets the default character set (encoding) to
+     sets the default character set to
      <literal>EUC_JP</literal> (Extended Unix Code for Japanese).  You
      can use <option>--encoding</option> instead of
-     <option>-E</option> if you prefer to type longer option strings.
+     <option>-E</option> if you prefer longer option strings.
      If no <option>-E</> or <option>--encoding</option> option is
      given, <command>initdb</> attempts to determine the appropriate
      encoding to use based on the specified or default locale.
@@ -762,8 +763,8 @@ CREATE DATABASE korean WITH ENCODING 'EUC_KR' LC_COLLATE='ko_KR.euckr' LC_CTYPE=
     <para>
      The encoding for a database is stored in the system catalog
      <literal>pg_database</literal>.  You can see it by using the
-     <option>-l</option> option or the <command>\l</command> command
-     of <command>psql</command>.
+     <command>psql</command> <option>-l</option> option or the
+     <command>\l</command> command.
 
 <screen>
 $ <userinput>psql -l</userinput>
@@ -784,11 +785,11 @@ $ <userinput>psql -l</userinput>
     <important>
      <para>
       On most modern operating systems, <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
-      can determine which character set is implied by an <envar>LC_CTYPE</>
+      can determine which character set is implied by the <envar>LC_CTYPE</>
       setting, and it will enforce that only the matching database encoding is
       used.  On older systems it is your responsibility to ensure that you use
       the encoding expected by the locale you have selected.  A mistake in
-      this area is likely to lead to strange misbehavior of locale-dependent
+      this area is likely to lead to strange behavior of locale-dependent
       operations such as sorting.
      </para>
 
@@ -1190,9 +1191,9 @@ RESET client_encoding;
     <para>
      If the conversion of a particular character is not possible
      &mdash; suppose you chose <literal>EUC_JP</literal> for the
-     server and <literal>LATIN1</literal> for the client, then some
-     Japanese characters do not have a representation in
-     <literal>LATIN1</literal> &mdash; then an error is reported.
+     server and <literal>LATIN1</literal> for the client, and some
+     Japanese characters are returned that do not have a representation in
+     <literal>LATIN1</literal> &mdash; an error is reported.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -1249,7 +1250,8 @@ RESET client_encoding;
 
        <listitem>
         <para>
-         <acronym>UTF</acronym>-8 is defined here.
+         <acronym>UTF</acronym>-8 (8-bit UCS/Unicode Transformation
+         Format) is defined here.
         </para>
        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

doc/src/sgml/client-auth.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/client-auth.sgml,v 1.130 2010/02/02 19:09:36 mha Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/client-auth.sgml,v 1.131 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="client-authentication">
  <title>Client Authentication</title>
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
      <term><literal>hostnossl</literal></term>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       This record type has the opposite logic to <literal>hostssl</>:
+       This record type has the opposite behavior of <literal>hostssl</>;
        it only matches connection attempts made over
        TCP/IP that do not use <acronym>SSL</acronym>.
       </para>
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
       <para>
        Specifies the client machine IP address range that this record
        matches. This field contains an IP address in standard dotted decimal
-       notation and a CIDR mask length. (IP addresses can only be
+       notation and a <acronym>CIDR</> mask length. (IP addresses can only be
        specified numerically, not as domain or host names.)  The mask
        length indicates the number of high-order bits of the client
        IP address that must match.  Bits to the right of this must
@@ -239,6 +239,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
        <literal>172.20.143.89/32</literal> for a single host, or
        <literal>172.20.143.0/24</literal> for a small network, or
        <literal>10.6.0.0/16</literal> for a larger one.  
+       <literal>0.0.0.0/0</literal> (<quote>all balls</>) represents all addresses.
        To specify a single host, use a CIDR mask of 32 for IPv4 or
        128 for IPv6.  In a network address, do not omit trailing zeroes.
       </para>
@@ -296,8 +297,8 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
           Allow the connection unconditionally. This method
           allows anyone that can connect to the
           <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> database server to login as
-          any <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> user they like,
-          without the need for a password.  See <xref
+          any <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> user they wish,
+          without the need for a password or any other authentication.  See <xref
           linkend="auth-trust"> for details.
          </para>
         </listitem>
@@ -308,7 +309,10 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
         <listitem>
          <para>
           Reject the connection unconditionally. This is useful for
-          <quote>filtering out</> certain hosts from a group.
+          <quote>filtering out</> certain hosts from a group, e.g. a
+          <literal>reject</> line blocks a specific host from connecting,
+          but a later line allows the remaining hosts in a specific
+          network to connect.
          </para>
         </listitem>
        </varlistentry>
@@ -388,7 +392,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
         <term><literal>ldap</></term>
         <listitem>
          <para>
-          Authenticate using an LDAP server. See <xref
+          Authenticate using an <acronym>LDAP</> server. See <xref
           linkend="auth-ldap"> for details.
          </para>
         </listitem>
@@ -473,7 +477,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
    the main server process receives a
    <systemitem>SIGHUP</systemitem><indexterm><primary>SIGHUP</primary></indexterm>
    signal. If you edit the file on an
-   active system, you will need to signal the server
+   active system, you will need to signal the postmaster
    (using <literal>pg_ctl reload</> or <literal>kill -HUP</>) to make it
    re-read the file.
   </para>
@@ -485,7 +489,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
     <literal>CONNECT</> privilege for the database.  If you wish to
     restrict which users can connect to which databases, it's usually
     easier to control this by granting/revoking <literal>CONNECT</> privilege
-    than to put the rules into <filename>pg_hba.conf</filename> entries.
+    than to put the rules in <filename>pg_hba.conf</filename> entries.
    </para>
   </tip>
 
@@ -498,7 +502,7 @@ hostnossl  <replaceable>database</replaceable>  <replaceable>user</replaceable>
    <example id="example-pg-hba.conf">
     <title>Example <filename>pg_hba.conf</filename> entries</title>
 <programlisting>
-# Allow any user on the local system to connect to any database under
+# Allow any user on the local system to connect to any database with
 # any database user name using Unix-domain sockets (the default for local
 # connections).
 #
@@ -517,7 +521,7 @@ host    all             all             127.0.0.1       255.255.255.255     trus
 
 # Allow any user from any host with IP address 192.168.93.x to connect
 # to database "postgres" as the same user name that ident reports for
-# the connection (typically the Unix user name).
+# the connection (typically the operating system user name).
 #
 # TYPE  DATABASE        USER            CIDR-ADDRESS            METHOD
 host    postgres        all             192.168.93.0/24         ident
@@ -531,8 +535,8 @@ host    postgres        all             192.168.12.10/32        md5
 # In the absence of preceding "host" lines, these two lines will
 # reject all connections from 192.168.54.1 (since that entry will be
 # matched first), but allow Kerberos 5 connections from anywhere else
-# on the Internet.  The zero mask means that no bits of the host IP
-# address are considered so it matches any host.
+# on the Internet.  The zero mask causes no bits of the host IP
+# address to be considered, so it matches any host.
 #
 # TYPE  DATABASE        USER            CIDR-ADDRESS            METHOD
 host    all             all             192.168.54.1/32         reject
@@ -654,7 +658,7 @@ mymap   /^(.*)@otherdomain\.com$   guest
    when the main server process receives a
    <systemitem>SIGHUP</systemitem><indexterm><primary>SIGHUP</primary></indexterm>
    signal. If you edit the file on an
-   active system, you will need to signal the server
+   active system, you will need to signal the postmaster
    (using <literal>pg_ctl reload</> or <literal>kill -HUP</>) to make it
    re-read the file.
   </para>
@@ -663,16 +667,16 @@ mymap   /^(.*)@otherdomain\.com$   guest
    A <filename>pg_ident.conf</filename> file that could be used in
    conjunction with the <filename>pg_hba.conf</> file in <xref
    linkend="example-pg-hba.conf"> is shown in <xref
-   linkend="example-pg-ident.conf">. In this example setup, anyone
+   linkend="example-pg-ident.conf">. In this example, anyone
    logged in to a machine on the 192.168 network that does not have the
-   Unix user name <literal>bryanh</>, <literal>ann</>, or
+   operating system user name <literal>bryanh</>, <literal>ann</>, or
    <literal>robert</> would not be granted access. Unix user
    <literal>robert</> would only be allowed access when he tries to
    connect as <productname>PostgreSQL</> user <literal>bob</>, not
    as <literal>robert</> or anyone else. <literal>ann</> would
    only be allowed to connect as <literal>ann</>. User
    <literal>bryanh</> would be allowed to connect as either
-   <literal>bryanh</> himself or as <literal>guest1</>.
+   <literal>bryanh</> or as <literal>guest1</>.
   </para>
 
   <example id="example-pg-ident.conf">
@@ -759,7 +763,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     The password-based authentication methods are <literal>md5</>
     and <literal>password</>. These methods operate
     similarly except for the way that the password is sent across the
-    connection: respectively, MD5-hashed and clear-text.
+    connection, i.e. respectively, MD5-hashed and clear-text.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -780,8 +784,8 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     catalog. Passwords can be managed with the SQL commands
     <xref linkend="sql-createuser" endterm="sql-createuser-title"> and
     <xref linkend="sql-alteruser" endterm="sql-alteruser-title">,
-    e.g., <userinput>CREATE USER foo WITH PASSWORD 'secret';</userinput>.
-    By default, that is, if no password has been set up, the stored password
+    e.g., <userinput>CREATE USER foo WITH PASSWORD 'secret'</userinput>.
+    If no password has been set up for a user, the stored password
     is null and password authentication will always fail for that user.
    </para>
 
@@ -802,7 +806,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     authentication according to RFC 1964. <productname>GSSAPI</productname>
     provides automatic authentication (single sign-on) for systems
     that support it. The authentication itself is secure, but the
-    data sent over the database connection will be in clear unless
+    data sent over the database connection will be send unencrypted unless
     <acronym>SSL</acronym> is used.
    </para>
 
@@ -877,7 +881,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
    <para>
     When using <productname>Kerberos</productname> authentication,
     <productname>SSPI</productname> works the same way
-    <productname>GSSAPI</productname> does. See <xref linkend="gssapi-auth">
+    <productname>GSSAPI</productname> does; see <xref linkend="gssapi-auth">
     for details.
    </para>
 
@@ -941,7 +945,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     <productname>Kerberos</productname> is an industry-standard secure
     authentication system suitable for distributed computing over a public
     network. A description of the <productname>Kerberos</productname> system
-    is far beyond the scope of this document; in full generality it can be
+    is beyond the scope of this document; in full generality it can be
     quite complex (yet powerful). The
     <ulink url="http://www.nrl.navy.mil/CCS/people/kenh/kerberos-faq.html">
     Kerberos <acronym>FAQ</></ulink> or
@@ -973,8 +977,9 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     changed from the default <literal>postgres</literal> at build time using
     <literal>./configure --with-krb-srvnam=</><replaceable>whatever</>.
     In most environments,
-    this parameter never needs to be changed. However, to support multiple
-    <productname>PostgreSQL</> installations on the same host it is necessary.
+    this parameter never needs to be changed. However, it is necessary
+    when supporting multiple <productname>PostgreSQL</> installations
+    on the same host.
     Some Kerberos implementations might also require a different service name,
     such as Microsoft Active Directory which requires the service name
     to be in uppercase (<literal>POSTGRES</literal>).
@@ -1005,7 +1010,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     of the key file is specified by the <xref
     linkend="guc-krb-server-keyfile"> configuration
     parameter. The default is
-    <filename>/usr/local/pgsql/etc/krb5.keytab</> (or whichever
+    <filename>/usr/local/pgsql/etc/krb5.keytab</> (or whatever
     directory was specified as <varname>sysconfdir</> at build time).
    </para>
 
@@ -1035,7 +1040,7 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     <productname>Apache</productname> web server, you can use
     <literal>AuthType KerberosV5SaveCredentials</literal> with a
     <application>mod_perl</application> script. This gives secure
-    database access over the web, no extra passwords required.
+    database access over the web, with no additional passwords required.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -1137,13 +1142,13 @@ omicron         bryanh                  guest1
     Since <productname>PostgreSQL</> knows both <replaceable>X</> and
     <replaceable>Y</> when a physical connection is established, it
     can interrogate the ident server on the host of the connecting
-    client and could theoretically determine the operating system user
-    for any given connection this way.
+    client and can theoretically determine the operating system user
+    for any given connection.
    </para>
 
    <para>
     The drawback of this procedure is that it depends on the integrity
-    of the client: if the client machine is untrusted or compromised
+    of the client: if the client machine is untrusted or compromised,
     an attacker could run just about any program on port 113 and
     return any user name he chooses. This authentication method is
     therefore only appropriate for closed networks where each client
@@ -1562,7 +1567,7 @@ FATAL:  database "testdb" does not exist
    <para>
     The server log might contain more information about an
     authentication failure than is reported to the client. If you are
-    confused about the reason for a failure, check the log.
+    confused about the reason for a failure, check the server log.
    </para>
    </tip>
   </sect1>

doc/src/sgml/config.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.248 2010/02/01 13:40:28 sriggs Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.249 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter Id="runtime-config">
   <title>Server Configuration</title>
@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@
    <para>
     All parameter names are case-insensitive. Every parameter takes a
     value of one of five types: Boolean, integer, floating point,
-    string or enum. Boolean values can be written as <literal>ON</literal>,
-    <literal>OFF</literal>, <literal>TRUE</literal>,
-    <literal>FALSE</literal>, <literal>YES</literal>,
-    <literal>NO</literal>, <literal>1</literal>, <literal>0</literal>
+    string or enum. Boolean values can be written as <literal>on</literal>,
+    <literal>off</literal>, <literal>true</literal>,
+    <literal>false</literal>, <literal>yes</literal>,
+    <literal>no</literal>, <literal>1</literal>, <literal>0</literal>
     (all case-insensitive) or any unambiguous prefix of these.
    </para>
 
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ shared_buffers = 128MB
 </programlisting>
     One parameter is specified per line. The equal sign between name and
     value is optional. Whitespace is insignificant and blank lines are
-    ignored. Hash marks (<literal>#</literal>) introduce comments
-    anywhere.  Parameter values that are not simple identifiers or
+    ignored. Hash marks (<literal>#</literal>) designate the rest of the
+    line as a comment.  Parameter values that are not simple identifiers or
     numbers must be single-quoted.  To embed a single quote in a parameter
     value, write either two quotes (preferred) or backslash-quote.
    </para>
@@ -155,9 +155,9 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
     values for the parameter. Some parameters cannot be changed via
     <command>SET</command>: for example, if they control behavior that
     cannot be changed without restarting the entire
-    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> server.  Also, some parameters can
-    be modified via <command>SET</command> or <command>ALTER</> by superusers,
-    but not by ordinary users.
+    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> server.  Also,
+    some <command>SET</command> or <command>ALTER</> parameter modifications
+    require superuser permission.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
          at all, in which case only Unix-domain sockets can be used to connect
          to it.
          The default value is <systemitem class="systemname">localhost</>,
-         which allows only local <quote>loopback</> connections to be
+         which allows only local TCP/IP <quote>loopback</> connections to be
          made.  While client authentication (<xref
          linkend="client-authentication">) allows fine-grained control
          over who can access the server, <varname>listen_addresses</varname>
@@ -440,8 +440,8 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         server.)  In combination with the parameter
         <varname>unix_socket_permissions</varname> this can be used as
         an additional access control mechanism for Unix-domain connections.
-        By default this is the empty string, which selects the default
-        group for the current user.  This parameter can only be set at
+        By default this is the empty string, which uses the default
+        group of the server user.  This parameter can only be set at
         server start.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         Sets the access permissions of the Unix-domain socket.  Unix-domain
         sockets use the usual Unix file system permission set.
         The parameter value is expected to be a numeric mode
-        specification in the form accepted by the
+        specified in the format accepted by the
         <function>chmod</function> and <function>umask</function>
         system calls.  (To use the customary octal format the number
         must start with a <literal>0</literal> (zero).)
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         <literal>0770</literal> (only user and group, see also
         <varname>unix_socket_group</varname>) and <literal>0700</literal>
         (only user). (Note that for a Unix-domain socket, only write
-        permission matters and so there is no point in setting or revoking
+        permission matters, so there is no point in setting or revoking
         read or execute permissions.)
        </para>
 
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
        <para>
         Maximum time to complete client authentication, in seconds. If a
         would-be client has not completed the authentication protocol in
-        this much time, the server breaks the connection. This prevents
+        this much time, the server closes the connection. This prevents
         hung clients from occupying a connection indefinitely.
         The default is one minute (<literal>1m</>).
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
@@ -707,8 +707,9 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
        <para>
         With this parameter enabled, you can still create ordinary global
         users.  Simply append <literal>@</> when specifying the user
-        name in the client.  The <literal>@</> will be stripped off
-        before the user name is looked up by the server.
+        name in the client, e.g. <literal>joe@</>.  The <literal>@</>
+        will be stripped off before the user name is looked up by the
+        server.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -783,15 +784,15 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         session.  These are session-local buffers used only for access to
         temporary tables.  The default is eight megabytes
         (<literal>8MB</>).  The setting can be changed within individual
-        sessions, but only up until the first use of temporary tables
-        within a session; subsequent attempts to change the value will
+        sessions, but only before the first use of temporary tables
+        within the session; subsequent attempts to change the value will
         have no effect on that session.
        </para>
 
        <para>
         A session will allocate temporary buffers as needed up to the limit
         given by <varname>temp_buffers</>.  The cost of setting a large
-        value in sessions that do not actually need a lot of temporary
+        value in sessions that do not actually need many temporary
         buffers is only a buffer descriptor, or about 64 bytes, per
         increment in <varname>temp_buffers</>.  However if a buffer is
         actually used an additional 8192 bytes will be consumed for it
@@ -849,13 +850,13 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Specifies the amount of memory to be used by internal sort operations
-        and hash tables before switching to temporary disk files. The value
+        and hash tables before writing to temporary disk files. The value
         defaults to one megabyte (<literal>1MB</>).
         Note that for a complex query, several sort or hash operations might be
-        running in parallel; each one will be allowed to use as much memory
-        as this value specifies before it starts to put data into temporary
+        running in parallel; each operation will be allowed to use as much memory
+        as this value specifies before it starts to write data into temporary
         files. Also, several running sessions could be doing such operations
-        concurrently.  So the total memory used could be many
+        concurrently.  Therefore, the total memory used could be many
         times the value of <varname>work_mem</varname>; it is necessary to
         keep this fact in mind when choosing the value. Sort operations are
         used for <literal>ORDER BY</>, <literal>DISTINCT</>, and
@@ -873,7 +874,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Specifies the maximum amount of memory to be used in maintenance
+        Specifies the maximum amount of memory to be used by maintenance
         operations, such as <command>VACUUM</command>, <command>CREATE
         INDEX</>, and <command>ALTER TABLE ADD FOREIGN KEY</>.  It defaults
         to 16 megabytes (<literal>16MB</>).  Since only one of these
@@ -916,9 +917,9 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         the actual kernel limit will mean that a runaway recursive function
         can crash an individual backend process.  On platforms where
         <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> can determine the kernel limit,
-        it will not let you set this variable to an unsafe value.  However,
-        not all platforms provide the information, so caution is recommended
-        in selecting a value.
+        the server will not allow this variable to be set to an unsafe
+        value.  However, not all platforms provide the information,
+        so caution is recommended in selecting a value.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -942,7 +943,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         a safe per-process limit, you don't need to worry about this setting.
         But on some platforms (notably, most BSD systems), the kernel will
         allow individual processes to open many more files than the system
-        can really support when a large number of processes all try to open
+        can actually support if many processes all try to open
         that many files. If you find yourself seeing <quote>Too many open
         files</> failures, try reducing this setting.
         This parameter can only be set at server start.
@@ -957,14 +958,14 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        This variable specifies one or more shared libraries that are
-        to be preloaded at server start. If more than one library is to be
-        loaded, separate their names with commas. For example,
+        This variable specifies one or more shared libraries
+        to be preloaded at server start. For example,
         <literal>'$libdir/mylib'</literal> would cause
         <literal>mylib.so</> (or on some platforms,
         <literal>mylib.sl</>) to be preloaded from the installation's
         standard library directory.
-        This parameter can only be set at server start.
+        If more than one library is to be loaded, separate their names
+        with commas.  This parameter can only be set at server start.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -1024,15 +1025,15 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       various I/O operations that are performed.  When the accumulated
       cost reaches a limit (specified by
       <varname>vacuum_cost_limit</varname>), the process performing
-      the operation will sleep for a while (specified by
-      <varname>vacuum_cost_delay</varname>). Then it will reset the
+      the operation will sleep for a short period of time, as specified by
+      <varname>vacuum_cost_delay</varname>. Then it will reset the
       counter and continue execution.
      </para>
 
      <para>
       The intent of this feature is to allow administrators to reduce
       the I/O impact of these commands on concurrent database
-      activity. There are many situations in which it is not very
+      activity. There are many situations where it is not
       important that maintenance commands like
       <command>VACUUM</command> and <command>ANALYZE</command> finish
       quickly; however, it is usually very important that these
@@ -1156,15 +1157,15 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
      <para>
       There is a separate server
       process called the <firstterm>background writer</>, whose function
-      is to issue writes of <quote>dirty</> shared buffers.  The intent is
-      that server processes handling user queries should seldom or never have
-      to wait for a write to occur, because the background writer will do it.
-      However there is a net overall
-      increase in I/O load, because a repeatedly-dirtied page might
-      otherwise be written only once per checkpoint interval, but the
-      background writer might write it several times in the same interval.
-      The parameters discussed in this subsection can be used to
-      tune the behavior for local needs.
+      is to issue writes of <quote>dirty</> (new or modified) shared
+      buffers.  It writes shared buffers so server processes handling
+      user queries seldom or never need to wait for a write to occur.
+      However, the background writer does cause a net overall
+      increase in I/O load, because while a repeatedly-dirtied page might
+      otherwise be written only once per checkpoint interval, the
+      background writer might write it several times as it is dirtied
+      in the same interval.  The parameters discussed in this subsection
+      can be used to tune the behavior for local needs.
      </para>
 
      <variablelist>
@@ -1329,7 +1330,9 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         allowed to do its best in buffering, ordering, and delaying
         writes. This can result in significantly improved performance.
         However, if the system crashes, the results of the last few
-        committed transactions might be lost in part or whole. In the
+        committed transactions might be completely lost, or worse,
+        might appear partially committed, leaving the database in an
+        inconsistent state. In the
         worst case, unrecoverable data corruption might occur.
         (Crashes of the database software itself are <emphasis>not</>
         a risk factor here.  Only an operating-system-level crash
@@ -1357,7 +1360,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
+        <varname>fsync</varname> can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
         file or on the server command line.
         If you turn this parameter off, also consider turning off 
         <xref linkend="guc-full-page-writes">.
@@ -1409,7 +1412,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
        <para>
         Method used for forcing WAL updates out to disk.
         If <varname>fsync</varname> is off then this setting is irrelevant,
-        since updates will not be forced out at all.
+        since WAL file updates will not be forced out at all.
         Possible values are:
        </para>
        <itemizedlist>
@@ -1468,8 +1471,8 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         that contains a mix of old and new data.  The row-level change data
         normally stored in WAL will not be enough to completely restore
         such a page during post-crash recovery.  Storing the full page image
-        guarantees that the page can be correctly restored, but at a price
-        in increasing the amount of data that must be written to WAL.
+        guarantees that the page can be correctly restored, but at the price
+        of increasing the amount of data that must be written to WAL.
         (Because WAL replay always starts from a checkpoint, it is sufficient
         to do this during the first change of each page after a checkpoint.
         Therefore, one way to reduce the cost of full-page writes is to
@@ -1483,7 +1486,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         <varname>fsync</>, though smaller.  It might be safe to turn off
         this parameter if you have hardware (such as a battery-backed disk
         controller) or file-system software that reduces
-        the risk of partial page writes to an acceptably low level (e.g., ReiserFS 4).
+        the risk of partial page writes to an acceptably low level (e.g., ZFS).
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -1630,8 +1633,8 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Specifies the target length of checkpoints, as a fraction of
-        the checkpoint interval. The default is 0.5.
+        Specifies the target of checkpoint completion, as a fraction of
+        total time between checkpoints. The default is 0.5.
 
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
         file or on the server command line.
@@ -1671,7 +1674,7 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       <listitem>
        <para>
         When <varname>archive_mode</> is enabled, completed WAL segments
-        can be sent to archive storage by setting
+        are sent to archive storage by setting
         <xref linkend="guc-archive-command">.
         <varname>archive_mode</> and <varname>archive_command</> are
         separate variables so that <varname>archive_command</> can be
@@ -1688,10 +1691,10 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        The shell command to execute to archive a completed segment of
-        the WAL file series.  Any <literal>%p</> in the string is
+        The shell command to execute to archive a completed WAL file
+        segment.  Any <literal>%p</> in the string is
         replaced by the path name of the file to archive, and any
-        <literal>%f</> is replaced by the file name only.
+        <literal>%f</> is replaced by only the file name.
         (The path name is relative to the working directory of the server,
         i.e., the cluster's data directory.)
         Use <literal>%%</> to embed an actual <literal>%</> character in the
@@ -1701,9 +1704,13 @@ SET ENABLE_SEQSCAN TO OFF;
         file or on the server command line.  It is ignored unless
         <varname>archive_mode</> was enabled at server start.
         If <varname>archive_command</> is an empty string (the default) while
-        <varname>archive_mode</> is enabled, then WAL archiving is temporarily
+        <varname>archive_mode</> is enabled, WAL archiving is temporarily
         disabled, but the server continues to accumulate WAL segment files in
-        the expectation that a command will soon be provided.
+        the expectation that a command will soon be provided.  Setting
+        <varname>archive_mode</> to a command that does nothing but
+        return true, e.g. <literal>/bin/true</>, effectively disables
+        archiving, but also breaks the chain of WAL files needed for
+        archive recovery, so it should only be used in unusual circumstances.
        </para>
        <para>
         It is important for the command to return a zero exit status if
@@ -1723,11 +1730,11 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        The <xref linkend="guc-archive-command"> is only invoked on
+        The <xref linkend="guc-archive-command"> is only invoked for
         completed WAL segments. Hence, if your server generates little WAL
         traffic (or has slack periods where it does so), there could be a
         long delay between the completion of a transaction and its safe
-        recording in archive storage.  To put a limit on how old unarchived
+        recording in archive storage.  To limit how old unarchived
         data can be, you can set <varname>archive_timeout</> to force the
         server to switch to a new WAL segment file periodically.  When this
         parameter is greater than zero, the server will switch to a new
@@ -1854,16 +1861,15 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
        These configuration parameters provide a crude method of
        influencing the query plans chosen by the query optimizer. If
        the default plan chosen by the optimizer for a particular query
-       is not optimal, a temporary solution can be found by using one
+       is not optimal, a <emphasis>temporary</> solution is to use one
        of these configuration parameters to force the optimizer to
-       choose a different plan.  Turning one of these settings off
-       permanently is seldom a good idea, however.
+       choose a different plan.
        Better ways to improve the quality of the
        plans chosen by the optimizer include adjusting the <xref
        linkend="runtime-config-query-constants"
        endterm="runtime-config-query-constants-title">,  running <xref
-       linkend="sql-analyze" endterm="sql-analyze-title"> more
-       frequently, increasing the value of the <xref
+       linkend="sql-analyze" endterm="sql-analyze-title"> manually, increasing
+       the value of the <xref
        linkend="guc-default-statistics-target"> configuration parameter,
        and increasing the amount of statistics collected for
        specific columns using <command>ALTER TABLE SET
@@ -1950,7 +1956,7 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Enables or disables the query planner's use of nested-loop join
-        plans. It's not possible to suppress nested-loop joins entirely,
+        plans. It is impossible to suppress nested-loop joins entirely,
         but turning this variable off discourages the planner from using
         one if there are other methods available. The default is
         <literal>on</>.
@@ -1969,7 +1975,7 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Enables or disables the query planner's use of sequential scan
-        plan types. It's not possible to suppress sequential scans
+        plan types. It is impossible to suppress sequential scans
         entirely, but turning this variable off discourages the planner
         from using one if there are other methods available. The
         default is <literal>on</>.
@@ -1985,7 +1991,7 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Enables or disables the query planner's use of explicit sort
-        steps. It's not possible to suppress explicit sorts entirely,
+        steps. It is impossible to suppress explicit sorts entirely,
         but turning this variable off discourages the planner from
         using one if there are other methods available. The default
         is <literal>on</>.
@@ -2017,8 +2023,8 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
      The <firstterm>cost</> variables described in this section are measured
      on an arbitrary scale.  Only their relative values matter, hence
      scaling them all up or down by the same factor will result in no change
-     in the planner's choices.  Traditionally, these variables have been
-     referenced to sequential page fetches as the unit of cost; that is,
+     in the planner's choices.  By default, these cost variables are based on
+     the cost of sequential page fetches; that is,
      <varname>seq_page_cost</> is conventionally set to <literal>1.0</>
      and the other cost variables are set with reference to that.  But
      you can use a different scale if you prefer, such as actual execution
@@ -2029,7 +2035,7 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
     <para>
      Unfortunately, there is no well-defined method for determining ideal
      values for the cost variables.  They are best treated as averages over
-     the entire mix of queries that a particular installation will get.  This
+     the entire mix of queries that a particular installation will receive.  This
      means that changing them on the basis of just a few experiments is very
      risky.
     </para>
@@ -2193,8 +2199,8 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
        <para>
         Enables or disables genetic query optimization.
         This is on by default.  It is usually best not to turn it off in
-        production; the <varname>geqo_threshold</varname> variable provides a
-        more granular way to control use of GEQO.
+        production; the <varname>geqo_threshold</varname> variable provides
+        more granular control of GEQO.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -2211,7 +2217,8 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
         <literal>FULL OUTER JOIN</> construct counts as only one <literal>FROM</>
         item.) The default is 12. For simpler queries it is usually best
         to use the deterministic, exhaustive planner, but for queries with
-        many tables the deterministic planner takes too long.
+        many tables the deterministic planner takes too long, often
+        longer than the penalty of executing a suboptimal plan.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -2320,8 +2327,8 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Sets the default statistics target for table columns that have
-        not had a column-specific target set via <command>ALTER TABLE
+        Sets the default statistics target for table columns without
+        a column-specific target set via <command>ALTER TABLE
         SET STATISTICS</>.  Larger values increase the time needed to
         do <command>ANALYZE</>, but might improve the quality of the
         planner's estimates. The default is 100. For more information
@@ -2349,6 +2356,8 @@ archive_command = 'copy "%p" "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f"'  # Windows
         <literal>partition</> (examine constraints only for inheritance child
         tables and <literal>UNION ALL</> subqueries).
         <literal>partition</> is the default setting.
+        It is often used with inheritance and partitioned tables to
+        improve performance.
       </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -2366,9 +2375,7 @@ SELECT * FROM parent WHERE key = 2400;
 </programlisting>
 
         With constraint exclusion enabled, this <command>SELECT</>
-        will not scan <structname>child1000</> at all.  This can
-        improve performance when inheritance is used to build
-        partitioned tables.
+        will not scan <structname>child1000</> at all, improving performance.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -2449,8 +2456,8 @@ SELECT * FROM parent WHERE key = 2400;
         for most uses. Setting it to 1 prevents any reordering of
         explicit <literal>JOIN</>s. Thus, the explicit join order
         specified in the query will be the actual order in which the
-        relations are joined. The query planner does not always choose
-        the optimal join order; advanced users can elect to
+        relations are joined. Because the query planner does not always choose
+        the optimal join order, advanced users can elect to
         temporarily set this variable to 1, and then specify the join
         order they desire explicitly.
         For more information see <xref linkend="explicit-joins">.
@@ -2505,7 +2512,8 @@ SELECT * FROM parent WHERE key = 2400;
        <para>
         If <systemitem>csvlog</> is included in <varname>log_destination</>,
         log entries are output in <quote>comma separated
-        value</> format, which is convenient for loading them into programs.
+        value</> (<acronym>CSV</>) format, which is convenient for
+        loading logs into programs.
         See <xref linkend="runtime-config-logging-csvlog"> for details.
         <varname>logging_collector</varname> must be enabled to generate 
         CSV-format log output.
@@ -2521,7 +2529,7 @@ SELECT * FROM parent WHERE key = 2400;
          <literal>LOCAL0</> through <literal>LOCAL7</> (see <xref
          linkend="guc-syslog-facility">), but the default
          <application>syslog</application> configuration on most platforms
-         will discard all such messages.  You will need to add something like
+         will discard all such messages.  You will need to add something like:
 <programlisting>
 local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
 </programlisting>
@@ -2539,9 +2547,8 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-         This parameter allows messages sent to <application>stderr</>,
-         and CSV-format log output, to be
-         captured and redirected into log files.
+         This parameter captures plain and CSV-format log messages
+         sent to <application>stderr</> and redirects them into log files.
          This approach is often more useful than
          logging to <application>syslog</>, since some types of messages
          might not appear in <application>syslog</> output (a common example
@@ -2832,7 +2839,11 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
         Controls the amount of detail written in the server log for each
         message that is logged.  Valid values are <literal>TERSE</>,
         <literal>DEFAULT</>, and <literal>VERBOSE</>, each adding more
-        fields to displayed messages.
+        fields to displayed messages.  <literal>VERBOSE</> logging
+        output includes the <link
+        linkend="errcodes-appendix">SQLSTATE</> error
+        code and the source code file name, function name,
+        and line number that generated the error.
         Only superusers can change this setting.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -2845,8 +2856,8 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Controls whether or not the SQL statement that causes an error
-        condition will be recorded in the server log.  The current
+        Controls which SQL statements that cause an error
+        condition are recorded in the server log.  The current
         SQL statement is included in the log entry for any message of
         the specified severity or higher.
         Valid values are <literal>DEBUG5</literal>,
@@ -3165,7 +3176,7 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
       <listitem>
        <para>
         By default, connection log messages only show the IP address of the
-        connecting host. Turning on this parameter causes logging of the
+        connecting host. Turning this parameter on causes logging of the
         host name as well.  Note that depending on your host name resolution
         setup this might impose a non-negligible performance penalty.
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
@@ -3312,7 +3323,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
          If you set a nonempty value for <varname>log_line_prefix</>,
          you should usually make its last character be a space, to provide
          visual separation from the rest of the log line.  A punctuation
-         character could be used too.
+         character can be used too.
         </para>
        </tip>
 
@@ -3392,11 +3403,11 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Controls logging of use of temporary files.
+        Controls logging of temporary file names and sizes.
         Temporary files can be
         created for sorts, hashes, and temporary query results.
         A log entry is made for each temporary file when it is deleted.
-        A value of zero logs all temporary files, while positive
+        A value of zero logs all temporary file information, while positive
         values log only files whose size is greater than or equal to
         the specified number of kilobytes.  The
         default setting is <literal>-1</>, which disables such logging.
@@ -3415,7 +3426,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
         Sets the time zone used for timestamps written in the log.
         Unlike <xref linkend="guc-timezone">, this value is cluster-wide,
         so that all sessions will report timestamps consistently.
-        The default is <literal>unknown</>, which means to use whatever
+        The default is <literal>unknown</>, which means use whatever
         the system environment specifies as the time zone.  See <xref
         linkend="datatype-timezones"> for more information.
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
@@ -3432,7 +3443,8 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
        <para>
         Including <literal>csvlog</> in the <varname>log_destination</> list
         provides a convenient way to import log files into a database table.
-        This option emits log lines in comma-separated-value format,
+        This option emits log lines in comma-separated-values
+        (<acronym>CSV</>) format,
         with these columns:
         timestamp with milliseconds,
         user name,
@@ -3503,7 +3515,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
 
        <para>
        There are a few things you need to do to simplify importing CSV log
-       files easily and automatically:
+       files:
 
        <orderedlist>
          <listitem>
@@ -3575,11 +3587,11 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Enables the collection of information on the currently
-        executing command of each session, along with the time at
-        which that command began execution. This parameter is on by
+        executing command of each session, along with the time when
+        that command began execution. This parameter is on by
         default. Note that even when enabled, this information is not
         visible to all users, only to superusers and the user owning
-        the session being reported on; so it should not represent a
+        the session being reported on, so it should not represent a
         security risk.
         Only superusers can change this setting.
        </para>
@@ -3666,8 +3678,8 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
        <para>
         Sets the directory to store temporary statistics data in. This can be
         a path relative to the data directory or an absolute path. The default
-        is <filename>pg_stat_tmp</filename>. Pointing this at a RAM based
-        filesystem will decrease physical I/O requirements and can lead to
+        is <filename>pg_stat_tmp</filename>. Pointing this at a RAM-based
+        file system will decrease physical I/O requirements and can lead to
         improved performance.
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
         file or on the server command line.
@@ -3701,9 +3713,10 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        For each query, write performance statistics of the respective
+        For each query, output performance statistics of the respective
         module to the server log. This is a crude profiling
-        instrument.  <varname>log_statement_stats</varname> reports total
+        instrument, similar to the Unix <function>getrusage()</> operating
+        system facility.  <varname>log_statement_stats</varname> reports total
         statement statistics, while the others report per-module statistics.
         <varname>log_statement_stats</varname> cannot be enabled together with
         any of the per-module options.  All of these options are disabled by
@@ -3742,7 +3755,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
        <para>
         Controls whether the server should run the
         autovacuum launcher daemon.  This is on by default; however,
-        <xref linkend="guc-track-counts"> must also be turned on for
+        <xref linkend="guc-track-counts"> must also be enabled for
         autovacuum to work.
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
         file or on the server command line.
@@ -3800,7 +3813,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
         database.  In each round the daemon examines the
         database and issues <command>VACUUM</> and <command>ANALYZE</> commands
         as needed for tables in that database.  The delay is measured
-        in seconds, and the default is one minute (<literal>1m</>).
+        in seconds, and the default is one minute (<literal>1min</>).
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
         file or on the server command line.
        </para>
@@ -3965,7 +3978,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
        <para>
         This variable specifies the order in which schemas are searched
         when an object (table, data type, function, etc.) is referenced by a
-        simple name with no schema component.  When there are objects of
+        simple name with no schema specified.  When there are objects of
         identical names in different schemas, the one found first
         in the search path is used.  An object that is not in any of the
         schemas in the search path can only be referenced by specifying
@@ -3973,7 +3986,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        The value for <varname>search_path</varname> has to be a comma-separated
+        The value for <varname>search_path</varname> must be a comma-separated
         list of schema names.  If one of the list items is
         the special value <literal>$user</literal>, then the schema
         having the name returned by <function>SESSION_USER</> is substituted, if there
@@ -3993,9 +4006,9 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
         <literal>pg_temp_<replaceable>nnn</></>, is always searched if it
         exists.  It can be explicitly listed in the path by using the
         alias <literal>pg_temp</>.  If it is not listed in the path then
-        it is searched first (before even <literal>pg_catalog</>).  However,
+        it is searched first (even before <literal>pg_catalog</>).  However,
         the temporary schema is only searched for relation (table, view,
-        sequence, etc) and data type names.  It will never be searched for
+        sequence, etc) and data type names.  It is never searched for
         function or operator names.
        </para>
 
@@ -4022,7 +4035,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
         via the <acronym>SQL</acronym> function
         <function>current_schemas()</>.  This is not quite the same as
         examining the value of <varname>search_path</varname>, since
-        <function>current_schemas()</> shows how the requests
+        <function>current_schemas()</> shows how the items
         appearing in <varname>search_path</varname> were resolved.
        </para>
 
@@ -4075,11 +4088,11 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
       <indexterm><primary>tablespace</><secondary>temporary</></>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        This variable specifies tablespace(s) in which to create temporary
+        This variable specifies tablespaces in which to create temporary
         objects (temp tables and indexes on temp tables) when a
         <command>CREATE</> command does not explicitly specify a tablespace.
         Temporary files for purposes such as sorting large data sets
-        are also created in these tablespace(s).
+        are also created in these tablespaces.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -4210,8 +4223,7 @@ COPY postgres_log FROM '/full/path/to/logfile.csv' WITH csv;
         milliseconds, starting from the time the command arrives at the server
         from the client.  If <varname>log_min_error_statement</> is set to
         <literal>ERROR</> or lower, the statement that timed out will also be
-        logged.  A value of zero (the default) turns off the 
-        limitation.
+        logged.  A value of zero (the default) turns this off.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -4527,7 +4539,9 @@ SET XML OPTION { DOCUMENT | CONTENT };
 
        <para>
         Only superusers can change this setting, because it affects the
-        messages sent to the server log as well as to the client.
+        messages sent to the server log as well as to the client, and
+        an improper value might obscure the readability of the server
+        logs.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -4631,12 +4645,12 @@ SET XML OPTION { DOCUMENT | CONTENT };
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        The value for <varname>dynamic_library_path</varname> has to be a
+        The value for <varname>dynamic_library_path</varname> must be a
         list of absolute directory paths separated by colons (or semi-colons
         on Windows).  If a list element starts
         with the special string <literal>$libdir</literal>, the
         compiled-in <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> package
-        library directory is substituted for <literal>$libdir</literal>. This
+        library directory is substituted for <literal>$libdir</literal>; this
         is where the modules provided by the standard
         <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> distribution are installed.
         (Use <literal>pg_config --pkglibdir</literal> to find out the name of
@@ -4674,7 +4688,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Soft upper limit of the size of the set returned by GIN index. For more
+        Soft upper limit of the size of the set returned by GIN index scans. For more
         information see <xref linkend="gin-tips">.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -4711,7 +4725,8 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        There is no performance advantage to loading a library at session
+        Unlike <varname>local_preload_libraries</>, there is no
+        performance advantage to loading a library at session
         start rather than when it is first used.  Rather, the intent of
         this feature is to allow debugging or performance-measurement
         libraries to be loaded into specific sessions without an explicit
@@ -4761,10 +4776,10 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
        <para>
         This is the amount of time, in milliseconds, to wait on a lock
         before checking to see if there is a deadlock condition. The
-        check for deadlock is relatively slow, so the server doesn't run
+        check for deadlock is relatively expensive, so the server doesn't run
         it every time it waits for a lock. We optimistically assume
         that deadlocks are not common in production applications and
-        just wait on the lock for a while before starting the check for a
+        just wait on the lock for a while before checking for a
         deadlock. Increasing this value reduces the amount of time
         wasted in needless deadlock checks, but slows down reporting of
         real deadlock errors. The default is one second (<literal>1s</>),
@@ -4792,7 +4807,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
       </indexterm>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        The shared lock table is created to track locks on
+        The shared lock table tracks locks on
         <varname>max_locks_per_transaction</varname> * (<xref
         linkend="guc-max-connections"> + <xref
         linkend="guc-max-prepared-transactions">) objects (e.g.,  tables);
@@ -4889,7 +4904,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
 
        <para>
         Note that in a standard-conforming string literal, <literal>\</> just
-        means <literal>\</> anyway.  This parameter affects the handling of
+        means <literal>\</> anyway.  This parameter only affects the handling of
         non-standard-conforming literals, including
         escape string syntax (<literal>E'...'</>).
        </para>
@@ -4908,9 +4923,8 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
         newly-created tables, if neither <literal>WITH OIDS</literal>
         nor <literal>WITHOUT OIDS</literal> is specified. It also
         determines whether OIDs will be included in tables created by
-        <command>SELECT INTO</command>. In <productname>PostgreSQL</>
-        8.1 <varname>default_with_oids</> is <literal>off</> by default; in
-        prior versions of <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>, it
+        <command>SELECT INTO</command>. The parameter is <literal>off</>
+        by default; in <productname>PostgreSQL</> 8.0 and earlier, it
         was on by default.
        </para>
 
@@ -4983,7 +4997,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
       <listitem>
        <para>
         This controls the inheritance semantics.  If turned <literal>off</>,
-        subtables are not included by various commands by default; basically
+        subtables are not accessed by various commands by default; basically
         an implied <literal>ONLY</literal> key word.  This was added for 
         compatibility with releases prior to 7.1.  See
         <xref linkend="ddl-inherit"> for more information.
@@ -5006,12 +5020,13 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
         <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> to have its historical
         behavior of treating backslashes as escape characters.
         The default will change to <literal>on</> in a future release
-        to improve compatibility with the standard.
+        to improve compatibility with the SQL standard.
         Applications can check this
         parameter to determine how string literals will be processed.
         The presence of this parameter can also be taken as an indication
         that the escape string syntax (<literal>E'...'</>) is supported.
-        Escape string syntax should be used if an application desires
+        Escape string syntax (<xref linkend="sql-syntax-strings-escape">)
+        should be used if an application desires
         backslashes to be treated as escape characters.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -5072,11 +5087,11 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
         null values, so if you use that interface to access the database you
         might want to turn this option on.  Since expressions of the
         form <literal><replaceable>expr</> = NULL</literal> always
-        return the null value (using the correct interpretation) they are not
-        very useful and do not appear often in normal applications, so
+        return the null value (using the SQL standard interpretation), they are not
+        very useful and do not appear often in normal applications so
         this option does little harm in practice.  But new users are
         frequently confused about the semantics of expressions
-        involving null values, so this option is not on by default.
+        involving null values, so this option is off by default.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -5200,7 +5215,8 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
         less than the value of <literal>NAMEDATALEN</> when building
         the server. The default value of <literal>NAMEDATALEN</> is
         64; therefore the default
-        <varname>max_identifier_length</varname> is 63 bytes.
+        <varname>max_identifier_length</varname> is 63 bytes, which
+        can be less than 63 characters when using multi-byte encodings.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -5355,8 +5371,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
      module for a specific class is loaded, it will add the proper variable
      definitions for its class name, convert any placeholder
      values according to those definitions, and issue warnings for any
-     placeholders of its class that remain (which presumably would be
-     misspelled configuration variables).
+     unrecognized placeholders of its class that remain.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -5377,9 +5392,9 @@ plruby.use_strict = true        # generates error: unknown class name
 
     <para>
      The following parameters are intended for work on the
-     <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> source, and in some cases
+     <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> source code, and in some cases
      to assist with recovery of severely damaged databases.  There
-     should be no reason to use them in a production database setup.
+     should be no reason to use them on a production database.
      As such, they have been excluded from the sample
      <filename>postgresql.conf</> file.  Note that many of these
      parameters require special source compilation flags to work at all.
@@ -5445,7 +5460,7 @@ plruby.use_strict = true        # generates error: unknown class name
        <para>
         If nonzero, a delay of this many seconds occurs when a new
         server process is started, after it conducts the
-        authentication procedure.  This is intended to give an
+        authentication procedure.  This is intended to give developers an
         opportunity to attach to the server process with a debugger.
         This parameter cannot be changed after session start.
        </para>
@@ -5461,7 +5476,7 @@ plruby.use_strict = true        # generates error: unknown class name
        <para>
         If nonzero, a delay of this many seconds occurs just after a
         new server process is forked, before it conducts the
-        authentication procedure.  This is intended to give an
+        authentication procedure.  This is intended to give developers an
         opportunity to attach to the server process with a debugger to
         trace down misbehavior in authentication.
         This parameter can only be set in the <filename>postgresql.conf</>
@@ -5482,7 +5497,7 @@ plruby.use_strict = true        # generates error: unknown class name
         commands.  <xref linkend="guc-client-min-messages"> or
         <xref linkend="guc-log-min-messages"> must be
         <literal>DEBUG1</literal> or lower to send this output to the
-        client or server log, respectively.
+        client or server logs, respectively.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -5719,9 +5734,9 @@ plruby.use_strict = true        # generates error: unknown class name
         namely all the rows on the damaged page.  But it allows you to get
         past the error and retrieve rows from any undamaged pages that might
         be present in the table.  So it is useful for recovering data if
-        corruption has occurred due to hardware or software error.  You should
+        corruption has occurred due to a hardware or software error.  You should
         generally not set this on until you have given up hope of recovering
-        data from the damaged page(s) of a table.  The
+        data from the damaged pages of a table.  The
         default setting is <literal>off</>, and it can only be changed
         by a superuser.
        </para>

doc/src/sgml/diskusage.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/diskusage.sgml,v 1.18 2007/01/31 20:56:16 momjian Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/diskusage.sgml,v 1.19 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="diskusage">
  <title>Monitoring Disk Usage</title>
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
   <para>
    Each table has a primary heap disk file where most of the data is
    stored. If the table has any columns with potentially-wide values,
-   there is also a <acronym>TOAST</> file associated with the table,
+   there also might be a <acronym>TOAST</> file associated with the table,
    which is used to store values too wide to fit comfortably in the main
    table (see <xref linkend="storage-toast">).  There will be one index on the
-   <acronym>TOAST</> table, if present. There might also be indexes associated
+   <acronym>TOAST</> table, if present. There also might be indexes associated
    with the base table.  Each table and index is stored in a separate disk
    file &mdash; possibly more than one file, if the file would exceed one
    gigabyte.  Naming conventions for these files are described in <xref
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   You can monitor disk space from three ways:  using
+   You can monitor disk space three ways:  using
    SQL functions listed in <xref linkend="functions-admin-dbsize">,
    using <command>VACUUM</> information, and from the command line 
    using the tools in <filename>contrib/oid2name</>.  The SQL functions
@@ -60,13 +60,15 @@ SELECT relfilenode, relpages FROM pg_class WHERE relname = 'customer';
    like the following:
 <programlisting>
 SELECT relname, relpages
-    FROM pg_class,
-         (SELECT reltoastrelid FROM pg_class
-          WHERE relname = 'customer') ss
-    WHERE oid = ss.reltoastrelid
-       OR oid = (SELECT reltoastidxid FROM pg_class
+FROM pg_class,
+     (SELECT reltoastrelid
+      FROM pg_class
+      WHERE relname = 'customer') AS ss
+WHERE oid = ss.reltoastrelid OR
+      oid = (SELECT reltoastidxid
+             FROM pg_class
              WHERE oid = ss.reltoastrelid)
-    ORDER BY relname;
+ORDER BY relname;
 
        relname        | relpages 
 ----------------------+----------
@@ -79,11 +81,11 @@ SELECT relname, relpages
    You can easily display index sizes, too:
 <programlisting>
 SELECT c2.relname, c2.relpages
-    FROM pg_class c, pg_class c2, pg_index i
-    WHERE c.relname = 'customer'
-        AND c.oid = i.indrelid
-        AND c2.oid = i.indexrelid
-    ORDER BY c2.relname;
+FROM pg_class c, pg_class c2, pg_index i
+WHERE c.relname = 'customer' AND
+      c.oid = i.indrelid AND
+      c2.oid = i.indexrelid
+ORDER BY c2.relname;
 
        relname        | relpages 
 ----------------------+----------
@@ -95,7 +97,9 @@ SELECT c2.relname, c2.relpages
    It is easy to find your largest tables and indexes using this
    information:
 <programlisting>
-SELECT relname, relpages FROM pg_class ORDER BY relpages DESC;
+SELECT relname, relpages
+FROM pg_class
+ORDER BY relpages DESC;
 
        relname        | relpages 
 ----------------------+----------
@@ -105,9 +109,8 @@ SELECT relname, relpages FROM pg_class ORDER BY relpages DESC;
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   You can also use <filename>contrib/oid2name</> to show disk usage. See
-   <filename>README.oid2name</> in that directory for examples. It includes a script that
-   shows disk usage for each database.
+   You can also use <filename>contrib/oid2name</> to show disk usage; see
+   <xref linkend="oid2name"> for more details and examples.
   </para>
  </sect1>
 
@@ -116,7 +119,7 @@ SELECT relname, relpages FROM pg_class ORDER BY relpages DESC;
 
   <para>
    The most important disk monitoring task of a database administrator
-   is to make sure the disk doesn't grow full.  A filled data disk will
+   is to make sure the disk doesn't become full.  A filled data disk will
    not result in data corruption, but it might prevent useful activity
    from occurring. If the disk holding the WAL files grows full, database
    server panic and consequent shutdown might occur.
@@ -140,7 +143,7 @@ SELECT relname, relpages FROM pg_class ORDER BY relpages DESC;
    If your system supports per-user disk quotas, then the database
    will naturally be subject to whatever quota is placed on the user
    the server runs as.  Exceeding the quota will have the same bad
-   effects as running out of space entirely.
+   effects as running out of disk space entirely.
   </para>
  </sect1>
 </chapter>

doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml,v 1.36 2010/01/15 09:18:59 heikki Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml,v 1.37 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="high-availability">
  <title>High Availability, Load Balancing, and Replication</title>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
  <para>
   Performance must be considered in any choice.  There is usually a
   trade-off between functionality and
-  performance.  For example, a full synchronous solution over a slow
+  performance.  For example, a fully synchronous solution over a slow
   network might cut performance by more than half, while an asynchronous
   one might have a minimal performance impact.
  </para>
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
      Shared disk failover avoids synchronization overhead by having only one
      copy of the database.  It uses a single disk array that is shared by
      multiple servers.  If the main database server fails, the standby server
-     is able to mount and start the database as though it was recovering from
+     is able to mount and start the database as though it were recovering from
      a database crash.  This allows rapid failover with no data loss.
     </para>
 
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
     <para>
      A PITR warm standby server can be kept more up-to-date using the
      streaming replication feature built into <productname>PostgreSQL</> 8.5
-     onwards.
+     onwards;  see <xref linkend="warm-standby">.
     </para>
    </listitem>
   </varlistentry>
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
     <para>
      If queries are simply broadcast unmodified, functions like
      <function>random()</>, <function>CURRENT_TIMESTAMP</>, and
-     sequences would have different values on different servers.
+     sequences can have different values on different servers.
      This is because each server operates independently, and because
      SQL queries are broadcast (and not actual modified rows).  If
      this is unacceptable, either the middleware or the application

doc/src/sgml/install-win32.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/install-win32.sgml,v 1.55 2010/01/12 20:13:32 mha Exp $ -->
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 <chapter id="install-win32">
  <title>Installation from Source Code on <productname>Windows</productname></title>
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@
     </userinput>
    </screen>
 
-   To change the schedule used (default is the parallel), append it to the
+   To change the schedule used (default is parallel), append it to the
    command line like:
    <screen>
     <userinput>
@@ -544,9 +544,10 @@
   Normally you do not need to install any of the client files. You should
   place the <filename>libpq.dll</filename> file in the same directory
   as your applications executable file. Do not install
-  <filename>libpq.dll</filename> into your Windows, System or System32
-  directory unless absolutely necessary.
-  If this file is installed using a setup program, it should
+  <filename>libpq.dll</filename> into your <filename>Windows</>,
+  <filename>System</> or <filename>System32</> directory unless
+  absolutely necessary.
+  If this file is installed using a setup program, then it should
   be installed with version checking using the
   <symbol>VERSIONINFO</symbol> resource included in the file, to
   ensure that a newer version of the library is not overwritten.

doc/src/sgml/installation.sgml

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 <chapter id="installation">
  <title><![%standalone-include[<productname>PostgreSQL</>]]>
@@ -1106,7 +1106,7 @@ su - postgres
          a larger segment size.  This can be helpful to reduce the number of
          file descriptors consumed when working with very large tables.
          But be careful not to select a value larger than is supported
-         by your platform and the filesystem(s) you intend to use.  Other
+         by your platform and the file systems you intend to use.  Other
          tools you might wish to use, such as <application>tar</>, could
          also set limits on the usable file size.
          It is recommended, though not absolutely required, that this value

doc/src/sgml/maintenance.sgml

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+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/maintenance.sgml,v 1.98 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="maintenance">
  <title>Routine Database Maintenance Tasks</title>
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@
    discussed here are <emphasis>required</emphasis>, but they
    are repetitive in nature and can easily be automated using standard
    tools such as <application>cron</application> scripts or
-   Windows' <application>Task Scheduler</>.  But it is the database
+   Windows' <application>Task Scheduler</>.  It is the database
    administrator's responsibility to set up appropriate scripts, and to
    check that they execute successfully.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   One obvious maintenance task is creation of backup copies of the data on a
+   One obvious maintenance task is the creation of backup copies of the data on a
    regular schedule.  Without a recent backup, you have no chance of recovery
    after a catastrophe (disk failure, fire, mistakenly dropping a critical
    table, etc.).  The backup and recovery mechanisms available in
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
     the standard form of <command>VACUUM</> can run in parallel with production
     database operations.  (Commands such as <command>SELECT</command>,
     <command>INSERT</command>, <command>UPDATE</command>, and
-    <command>DELETE</command> will continue to function as normal, though you
+    <command>DELETE</command> will continue to function normally, though you
     will not be able to modify the definition of a table with commands such as
     <command>ALTER TABLE</command> while it is being vacuumed.)
     <command>VACUUM FULL</> requires exclusive lock on the table it is
@@ -151,11 +151,11 @@
     <command>UPDATE</> or <command>DELETE</> of a row does not
     immediately remove the old version of the row.
     This approach is necessary to gain the benefits of multiversion
-    concurrency control (see <xref linkend="mvcc">): the row version
+    concurrency control (<acronym>MVCC</>, see <xref linkend="mvcc">): the row version
     must not be deleted while it is still potentially visible to other
     transactions. But eventually, an outdated or deleted row version is no
     longer of interest to any transaction. The space it occupies must then be
-    reclaimed for reuse by new rows, to avoid infinite growth of disk
+    reclaimed for reuse by new rows, to avoid unbounded growth of disk
     space requirements. This is done by running <command>VACUUM</>.
    </para>
 
@@ -309,14 +309,14 @@
     statistics more frequently than others if your application requires it.
     In practice, however, it is usually best to just analyze the entire
     database, because it is a fast operation.  <command>ANALYZE</> uses a
-    statistical random sampling of the rows of a table rather than reading
+    statistically random sampling of the rows of a table rather than reading
     every single row.
    </para>
 
    <tip>
     <para>
      Although per-column tweaking of <command>ANALYZE</> frequency might not be
-     very productive, you might well find it worthwhile to do per-column
+     very productive, you might find it worthwhile to do per-column
      adjustment of the level of detail of the statistics collected by
      <command>ANALYZE</>.  Columns that are heavily used in <literal>WHERE</>
      clauses and have highly irregular data distributions might require a
@@ -341,11 +341,11 @@
     numbers: a row version with an insertion XID greater than the current
     transaction's XID is <quote>in the future</> and should not be visible
     to the current transaction.  But since transaction IDs have limited size
-    (32 bits at this writing) a cluster that runs for a long time (more
+    (32 bits) a cluster that runs for a long time (more
     than 4 billion transactions) would suffer <firstterm>transaction ID
     wraparound</>: the XID counter wraps around to zero, and all of a sudden
     transactions that were in the past appear to be in the future &mdash; which
-    means their outputs become invisible.  In short, catastrophic data loss.
+    means their output become invisible.  In short, catastrophic data loss.
     (Actually the data is still there, but that's cold comfort if you cannot
     get at it.)  To avoid this, it is necessary to vacuum every table
     in every database at least once every two billion transactions.
@@ -353,8 +353,9 @@
 
    <para>
     The reason that periodic vacuuming solves the problem is that
-    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> distinguishes a special XID
-    <literal>FrozenXID</>.  This XID is always considered older
+    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> reserves a special XID
+    as <literal>FrozenXID</>.  This XID does not follow the normal XID
+    comparison rules and is always considered older
     than every normal XID. Normal XIDs are
     compared using modulo-2<superscript>31</> arithmetic. This means
     that for every normal XID, there are two billion XIDs that are
@@ -365,12 +366,12 @@
     the next two billion transactions, no matter which normal XID we are
     talking about. If the row version still exists after more than two billion
     transactions, it will suddenly appear to be in the future. To
-    prevent data loss, old row versions must be reassigned the XID
+    prevent this, old row versions must be reassigned the XID
     <literal>FrozenXID</> sometime before they reach the
     two-billion-transactions-old mark. Once they are assigned this
     special XID, they will appear to be <quote>in the past</> to all
     normal transactions regardless of wraparound issues, and so such
-    row versions will be good until deleted, no matter how long that is.
+    row versions will be valid until deleted, no matter how long that is.
     This reassignment of old XIDs is handled by <command>VACUUM</>.
    </para>
 
@@ -398,14 +399,14 @@
 
    <para>
     The maximum time that a table can go unvacuumed is two billion
-    transactions minus the <varname>vacuum_freeze_min_age</> that was used
-    when <command>VACUUM</> last scanned the whole table.  If it were to go
+    transactions minus the <varname>vacuum_freeze_min_age</> value at
+    the time <command>VACUUM</> last scanned the whole table.  If it were to go
     unvacuumed for longer than
     that, data loss could result.  To ensure that this does not happen,
     autovacuum is invoked on any table that might contain XIDs older than the
     age specified by the configuration parameter <xref
     linkend="guc-autovacuum-freeze-max-age">.  (This will happen even if
-    autovacuum is otherwise disabled.)
+    autovacuum is disabled.)
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -416,10 +417,10 @@
     For tables that are regularly vacuumed for space reclamation purposes,
     this is of little importance.  However, for static tables
     (including tables that receive inserts, but no updates or deletes),
-    there is no need for vacuuming for space reclamation, and so it can
+    there is no need to vacuum for space reclamation, so it can
     be useful to try to maximize the interval between forced autovacuums
     on very large static tables.  Obviously one can do this either by
-    increasing <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> or by decreasing
+    increasing <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> or decreasing
     <varname>vacuum_freeze_min_age</>.
    </para>
 
@@ -444,10 +445,10 @@
     The sole disadvantage of increasing <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</>
     (and <varname>vacuum_freeze_table_age</> along with it)
     is that the <filename>pg_clog</> subdirectory of the database cluster
-    will take more space, because it must store the commit status for all
+    will take more space, because it must store the commit status of all
     transactions back to the <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> horizon.
     The commit status uses two bits per transaction, so if
-    <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> has its maximum allowed value of
+    <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> is set to its maximum allowed value of
     a little less than two billion, <filename>pg_clog</> can be expected to
     grow to about half a gigabyte.  If this is trivial compared to your
     total database size, setting <varname>autovacuum_freeze_max_age</> to
@@ -530,7 +531,7 @@ HINT:  To avoid a database shutdown, execute a database-wide VACUUM in "mydb".
     superuser, else it will fail to process system catalogs and thus not
     be able to advance the database's <structfield>datfrozenxid</>.)
     If these warnings are
-    ignored, the system will shut down and refuse to execute any new
+    ignored, the system will shut down and refuse to start any new
     transactions once there are fewer than 1 million transactions left
     until wraparound:
 
@@ -592,14 +593,14 @@ HINT:  Stop the postmaster and use a standalone backend to VACUUM in "mydb".
     The <xref linkend="guc-autovacuum-max-workers"> setting limits how many
     workers may be running at any time. If several large tables all become
     eligible for vacuuming in a short amount of time, all autovacuum workers
-    may become occupied with vacuuming those tables for a long period.
+    might become occupied with vacuuming those tables for a long period.
     This would result
     in other tables and databases not being vacuumed until a worker became
-    available. There is not a limit on how many workers might be in a
+    available. There is no limit on how many workers might be in a
     single database, but workers do try to avoid repeating work that has
     already been done by other workers. Note that the number of running
-    workers does not count towards the <xref linkend="guc-max-connections"> nor
-    the <xref linkend="guc-superuser-reserved-connections"> limits.
+    workers does not count towards <xref linkend="guc-max-connections"> or
+    <xref linkend="guc-superuser-reserved-connections"> limits.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -699,36 +700,26 @@ analyze threshold = analyze base threshold + analyze scale factor * number of tu
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   In <productname>PostgreSQL</> releases before 7.4, periodic reindexing
-   was frequently necessary to avoid <quote>index bloat</>, due to lack of
-   internal space reclamation in B-tree indexes.  Any situation in which the
-   range of index keys changed over time &mdash; for example, an index on
-   timestamps in a table where old entries are eventually deleted &mdash;
-   would result in bloat, because index pages for no-longer-needed portions
-   of the key range were not reclaimed for re-use.  Over time, the index size
-   could become indefinitely much larger than the amount of useful data in it.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-   In <productname>PostgreSQL</> 7.4 and later, index pages that have become
-   completely empty are reclaimed for re-use.  There is still a possibility
-   for inefficient use of space: if all but a few index keys on a page have
-   been deleted, the page remains allocated.  So a usage pattern in which all
-   but a few keys in each range are eventually deleted will see poor use of
-   space.  For such usage patterns, periodic reindexing is recommended.
+   Index pages that have become
+   completely empty are reclaimed for re-use.  However, here is still the possibility
+   of inefficient use of space: if all but a few index keys on a page have
+   been deleted, the page remains allocated.  Therefore, a usage
+   pattern in which most, but not all, keys in each range are eventually
+   deleted will see poor use of space.  For such usage patterns,
+   periodic reindexing is recommended.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    The potential for bloat in non-B-tree indexes has not been well
-   characterized.  It is a good idea to keep an eye on the index's physical
+   researched.  It is a good idea to periodically monitor the index's physical
    size when using any non-B-tree index type.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   Also, for B-tree indexes a freshly-constructed index is somewhat faster to
-   access than one that has been updated many times, because logically
+   Also, for B-tree indexes, a freshly-constructed index is slightly faster to
+   access than one that has been updated many times because logically
    adjacent pages are usually also physically adjacent in a newly built index.
-   (This consideration does not currently apply to non-B-tree indexes.)  It
+   (This consideration does not apply to non-B-tree indexes.)  It
    might be worthwhile to reindex periodically just to improve access speed.
   </para>
  </sect1>
@@ -744,11 +735,11 @@ analyze threshold = analyze base threshold + analyze scale factor * number of tu
 
   <para>
    It is a good idea to save the database server's log output
-   somewhere, rather than just routing it to <filename>/dev/null</>.
-   The log output is invaluable when it comes time to diagnose
+   somewhere, rather than just discarding it via <filename>/dev/null</>.
+   The log output is invaluable when diagnosing
    problems.  However, the log output tends to be voluminous
-   (especially at higher debug levels) and you won't want to save it
-   indefinitely.  You need to <quote>rotate</> the log files so that
+   (especially at higher debug levels) so you won't want to save it
+   indefinitely.  You need to <emphasis>rotate</> the log files so that
    new log files are started and old ones removed after a reasonable
    period of time.
   </para>
@@ -758,7 +749,7 @@ analyze threshold = analyze base threshold + analyze scale factor * number of tu
    <command>postgres</command> into a
    file, you will have log output, but
    the only way to truncate the log file is to stop and restart
-   the server. This might be OK if you are using
+   the server. This might be acceptable if you are using
    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> in a development environment,
    but few production servers would find this behavior acceptable.
   </para>
@@ -766,17 +757,18 @@ analyze threshold = analyze base threshold + analyze scale factor * number of tu
   <para>
    A better approach is to send the server's
    <systemitem>stderr</> output to some type of log rotation program.
-   There is a built-in log rotation program, which you can use by
+   There is a built-in log rotation facility, which you can use by
    setting the configuration parameter <literal>logging_collector</> to
    <literal>true</> in <filename>postgresql.conf</>.  The control
    parameters for this program are described in <xref
    linkend="runtime-config-logging-where">. You can also use this approach
-   to capture the log data in machine readable CSV format.
+   to capture the log data in machine readable <acronym>CSV</>
+   (comma-separated values) format.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    Alternatively, you might prefer to use an external log rotation
-   program, if you have one that you are already using with other
+   program if you have one that you are already using with other
    server software. For example, the <application>rotatelogs</application>
    tool included in the <productname>Apache</productname> distribution
    can be used with <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>.  To do this,
@@ -794,7 +786,7 @@ pg_ctl start | rotatelogs /var/log/pgsql_log 86400
 
   <para>
    Another production-grade approach to managing log output is to
-   send it all to <application>syslog</> and let
+   send it to <application>syslog</> and let
    <application>syslog</> deal with file rotation. To do this, set the
    configuration parameter <literal>log_destination</> to <literal>syslog</>
    (to log to <application>syslog</> only) in
@@ -810,15 +802,15 @@ pg_ctl start | rotatelogs /var/log/pgsql_log 86400
    On many systems, however, <application>syslog</> is not very reliable,
    particularly with large log messages; it might truncate or drop messages
    just when you need them the most.  Also, on <productname>Linux</>,
-   <application>syslog</> will sync each message to disk, yielding poor
-   performance.  (You can use a <literal>-</> at the start of the file name
+   <application>syslog</> will flush each message to disk, yielding poor
+   performance.  (You can use a <quote><literal>-</></> at the start of the file name
    in the <application>syslog</> configuration file to disable syncing.)
   </para>
 
   <para>
    Note that all the solutions described above take care of starting new
    log files at configurable intervals, but they do not handle deletion
-   of old, no-longer-interesting log files.  You will probably want to set
+   of old, no-longer-useful log files.  You will probably want to set
    up a batch job to periodically delete old log files.  Another possibility
    is to configure the rotation program so that old log files are overwritten
    cyclically.

doc/src/sgml/manage-ag.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/manage-ag.sgml,v 2.60 2009/12/19 01:49:02 tgl Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/manage-ag.sgml,v 2.61 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="managing-databases">
  <title>Managing Databases</title>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
    A database is a named collection of <acronym>SQL</acronym> objects
    (<quote>database objects</quote>).  Generally, every database
    object (tables, functions, etc.) belongs to one and only one
-   database.  (But there are a few system catalogs, for example
+   database.  (However there are a few system catalogs, for example
    <literal>pg_database</>, that belong to a whole cluster and
    are accessible from each database within the cluster.)  More
    accurately, a database is a collection of schemas and the schemas
@@ -38,15 +38,15 @@
    When connecting to the database server, a client must specify in
    its connection request the name of the database it wants to connect
    to. It is not possible to access more than one database per
-   connection. (But an application is not restricted in the number of
-   connections it opens to the same or other databases.)  Databases are
+   connection. However, an application is not restricted in the number of
+   connections it opens to the same or other databases.  Databases are
    physically separated and access control is managed at the
    connection level.  If one <productname>PostgreSQL</> server
    instance is to house projects or users that should be separate and
    for the most part unaware of each other, it is therefore
    recommendable to put them into separate databases.  If the projects
    or users are interrelated and should be able to use each other's
-   resources they should be put in the same database, but possibly
+   resources, they should be put in the same database but possibly
    into separate schemas.  Schemas are a purely logical structure and who can
    access what is managed by the privilege system.  More information about
    managing schemas is in <xref linkend="ddl-schemas">.
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ CREATE DATABASE <replaceable>name</>;
    where <replaceable>name</> follows the usual rules for
    <acronym>SQL</acronym> identifiers.  The current role automatically
    becomes the owner of the new database. It is the privilege of the
-   owner of a database to remove it later on (which also removes all
+   owner of a database to remove it later (which also removes all
    the objects in it, even if they have a different owner).
   </para>
 
@@ -123,14 +123,14 @@ CREATE DATABASE <replaceable>name</>;
    new database is created within the
    cluster, <literal>template1</literal> is essentially cloned.
    This means that any changes you make in <literal>template1</> are
-   propagated to all subsequently created databases. Therefore it is
-   unwise to use <literal>template1</> for real work, but when
-   used judiciously this feature can be convenient.  More details
+   propagated to all subsequently created databases. Because of this,
+   avoid creating objects in <literal>template1</> unless you want them
+   propagated to every newly created database.  More details
    appear in <xref linkend="manage-ag-templatedbs">.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   As a convenience, there is a program that you can
+   As a convenience, there is a program you can
    execute from the shell to create new databases,
    <command>createdb</>.<indexterm><primary>createdb</></>
 
@@ -143,8 +143,7 @@ createdb <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable>
    exactly as described above.
    The <xref linkend="app-createdb"> reference page contains the invocation
    details. Note that <command>createdb</> without any arguments will create
-   a database with the current user name, which might or might not be what
-   you want.
+   a database with the current user name.
   </para>
 
   <note>
@@ -155,8 +154,8 @@ createdb <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable>
   </note>
 
   <para>
-   Sometimes you want to create a database for someone else.  That
-   role should become the owner of the new database, so he can
+   Sometimes you want to create a database for someone else, and have him
+   become the owner of the new database, so he can
    configure and manage it himself.  To achieve that, use one of the
    following commands:
 <programlisting>
@@ -167,7 +166,7 @@ CREATE DATABASE <replaceable>dbname</> OWNER <replaceable>rolename</>;
 createdb -O <replaceable>rolename</> <replaceable>dbname</>
 </programlisting>
    from the shell.
-   You must be a superuser to be allowed to create a database for
+   Only the superuser is allowed to create a database for
    someone else (that is, for a role you are not a member of).
   </para>
  </sect1>
@@ -186,7 +185,7 @@ createdb -O <replaceable>rolename</> <replaceable>dbname</>
    objects in databases.  For example, if you install the procedural
    language <application>PL/Perl</> in <literal>template1</>, it will
    automatically be available in user databases without any extra
-   action being taken when those databases are made.
+   action being taken when those databases are created.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -204,7 +203,7 @@ createdb -O <replaceable>rolename</> <replaceable>dbname</>
    <literal>template1</>.  This is particularly handy when restoring a
    <literal>pg_dump</> dump: the dump script should be restored in a
    virgin database to ensure that one recreates the correct contents
-   of the dumped database, without any conflicts with objects that
+   of the dumped database, without conflicting with objects that
    might have been added to <literal>template1</> later on.
   </para>
 
@@ -238,8 +237,8 @@ createdb -T template0 <replaceable>dbname</>
    The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected to
    the source database while it is being copied.  <command>CREATE
    DATABASE</> will fail if any other connection exists when it starts;
-   otherwise, new connections to the source database are locked out
-   until <command>CREATE DATABASE</> completes.
+   during the copy operation, new connections to the source database
+   are prevented.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -251,9 +250,9 @@ createdb -T template0 <replaceable>dbname</>
    cloned by any user with <literal>CREATEDB</> privileges; if it is not set,
    only superusers and the owner of the database can clone it.
    If <literal>datallowconn</literal> is false, then no new connections
-   to that database will be allowed (but existing sessions are not killed
+   to that database will be allowed (but existing sessions are not terminated
    simply by setting the flag false).  The <literal>template0</literal>
-   database is normally marked <literal>datallowconn = false</> to prevent modification of it.
+   database is normally marked <literal>datallowconn = false</> to prevent its modification.
    Both <literal>template0</literal> and <literal>template1</literal>
    should always be marked with <literal>datistemplate = true</>.
   </para>
@@ -274,7 +273,7 @@ createdb -T template0 <replaceable>dbname</>
     The <literal>postgres</> database is also created when a database
     cluster is initialized.  This database is meant as a default database for
     users and applications to connect to. It is simply a copy of
-    <literal>template1</> and can be dropped and recreated if required.
+    <literal>template1</> and can be dropped and recreated if necessary.
    </para>
   </note>
  </sect1>
@@ -294,7 +293,7 @@ createdb -T template0 <replaceable>dbname</>
    <acronym>GEQO</acronym> optimizer for a given database, you'd
    ordinarily have to either disable it for all databases or make sure
    that every connecting client is careful to issue <literal>SET geqo
-   TO off;</literal>.  To make this setting the default within a particular
+   TO off</literal>.  To make this setting the default within a particular
    database, you can execute the command:
 <programlisting>
 ALTER DATABASE mydb SET geqo TO off;
@@ -306,7 +305,7 @@ ALTER DATABASE mydb SET geqo TO off;
    Note that users can still alter this setting during their sessions; it
    will only be the default.  To undo any such setting, use
    <literal>ALTER DATABASE <replaceable>dbname</> RESET
-   <replaceable>varname</>;</literal>.
+   <replaceable>varname</></literal>.
   </para>
  </sect1>
 
@@ -387,7 +386,7 @@ dropdb <replaceable class="parameter">dbname</replaceable>
 CREATE TABLESPACE fastspace LOCATION '/mnt/sda1/postgresql/data';
 </programlisting>
    The location must be an existing, empty directory that is owned by
-   the <productname>PostgreSQL</> system user.  All objects subsequently
+   the <productname>PostgreSQL</> operating system user.  All objects subsequently
    created within the tablespace will be stored in files underneath this
    directory.
   </para>
@@ -405,7 +404,7 @@ CREATE TABLESPACE fastspace LOCATION '/mnt/sda1/postgresql/data';
 
   <para>
    Creation of the tablespace itself must be done as a database superuser,
-   but after that you can allow ordinary database users to make use of it.
+   but after that you can allow ordinary database users to use it.
    To do that, grant them the <literal>CREATE</> privilege on it.
   </para>
 
@@ -500,8 +499,8 @@ SELECT spcname FROM pg_tablespace;
    Although not recommended, it is possible to adjust the tablespace
    layout by hand by redefining these links.  Two warnings: do not do so
    while the server is running; and after you restart the server,
-   update the <structname>pg_tablespace</> catalog to show the new
-   locations.  (If you do not, <literal>pg_dump</> will continue to show
+   update the <structname>pg_tablespace</> catalog with the new
+   locations.  (If you do not, <literal>pg_dump</> will continue to output
    the old tablespace locations.)
   </para>
 

doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml,v 1.75 2010/01/28 14:25:41 mha Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml,v 1.76 2010/02/03 17:25:05 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="monitoring">
  <title>Monitoring Database Activity</title>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>
-   On most platforms, <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> modifies its
+   On most Unix platforms, <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> modifies its
    command title as reported by <command>ps</>, so that individual server
    processes can readily be identified.  A sample display is
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ postgres  1016  0.1  2.4  6532 3080 pts/1    SN   13:19   0:00 postgres: tgl reg
    platforms, as do the details of what is shown.  This example is from a
    recent Linux system.)  The first process listed here is the
    master server process.  The command arguments
-   shown for it are the same ones given when it was launched.  The next two
+   shown for it are the same ones used when it was launched.  The next two
    processes are background worker processes automatically launched by the
    master process.  (The <quote>stats collector</> process will not be present
    if you have set
@@ -73,22 +73,22 @@ postgres  1016  0.1  2.4  6532 3080 pts/1    SN   13:19   0:00 postgres: tgl reg
 postgres: <replaceable>user</> <replaceable>database</> <replaceable>host</> <replaceable>activity</>
 </screen>
 
-  The user, database, and connection source host items remain the same for
+  The user, database, and (client) host items remain the same for
   the life of the client connection, but the activity indicator changes.
   The activity can be <literal>idle</> (i.e., waiting for a client command),
   <literal>idle in transaction</> (waiting for client inside a <command>BEGIN</> block),
   or a command type name such as <literal>SELECT</>.  Also,
-  <literal>waiting</> is attached if the server process is presently waiting
-  on a lock held by another server process.  In the above example we can infer
+  <literal>waiting</> is appended if the server process is presently waiting
+  on a lock held by another session.  In the above example we can infer
   that process 1003 is waiting for process 1016 to complete its transaction and
-  thereby release some lock or other.
+  thereby release some lock.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    If you have turned off <xref linkend="guc-update-process-title"> then the
    activity indicator is not updated; the process title is set only once
-   when a new process is launched.  On some platforms this saves a useful
-   amount of per-command overhead, on others it's insignificant.
+   when a new process is launched.  On some platforms this saves a measurable
+   amount of per-command overhead;  on others it's insignificant.
   </para>
 
   <tip>
@@ -118,15 +118,15 @@ postgres: <replaceable>user</> <replaceable>database</> <replaceable>host</> <re
    is a subsystem that supports collection and reporting of information about
    server activity.  Presently, the collector can count accesses to tables
    and indexes in both disk-block and individual-row terms.  It also tracks
-   total numbers of rows in each table, and the last vacuum and analyze times
+   the total number of rows in each table, and the last vacuum and analyze times
    for each table.  It can also count calls to user-defined functions and
    the total time spent in each one.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> also supports determining the exact
+   <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> also supports reporting of the exact
    command currently being executed by other server processes.  This is an
-   independent facility that does not depend on the collector process.
+   facility independent of the collector process.
   </para>
 
  <sect2 id="monitoring-stats-setup">
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ postgres: <replaceable>user</> <replaceable>database</> <replaceable>host</> <re
    When the postmaster shuts down, a permanent copy of the statistics
    data is stored in the <filename>global</filename> subdirectory. For increased
    performance, the parameter <xref linkend="guc-stats-temp-directory"> can
-   be pointed at a RAM based filesystem, decreasing physical I/O requirements.
+   be pointed at a RAM-based file system, decreasing physical I/O requirements.
   </para>
 
  </sect2>
@@ -205,9 +205,9 @@ postgres: <replaceable>user</> <replaceable>database</> <replaceable>host</> <re
    any of these statistics, it first fetches the most recent report emitted by
    the collector process and then continues to use this snapshot for all
    statistical views and functions until the end of its current transaction.
-   So the statistics will appear not to change as long as you continue the
+   So the statistics will show static information as long as you continue the
    current transaction.  Similarly, information about the current queries of
-   all processes is collected when any such information is first requested
+   all sessions is collected when any such information is first requested
    within a transaction, and the same information will be displayed throughout
    the transaction.
    This is a feature, not a bug, because it allows you to perform several
@@ -1603,7 +1603,7 @@ Total time (ns)                        2312105013
     SystemTap uses a different notation for trace scripts than DTrace does,
     even though the underlying trace points are compatible.  One point worth
     noting is that at this writing, SystemTap scripts must reference probe
-    names using double underlines in place of hyphens.  This is expected to
+    names using double underscores in place of hyphens.  This is expected to
     be fixed in future SystemTap releases.
    </para>
   </note>

doc/src/sgml/regress.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/regress.sgml,v 1.64 2009/08/07 20:50:21 petere Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/regress.sgml,v 1.65 2010/02/03 17:25:06 momjian Exp $ -->
 
  <chapter id="regress">
   <title id="regress-title">Regression Tests</title>
@@ -26,17 +26,14 @@
    running server, or using a temporary installation within the build
    tree.  Furthermore, there is a <quote>parallel</quote> and a
    <quote>sequential</quote> mode for running the tests.  The
-   sequential method runs each test script in turn, whereas the
+   sequential method runs each test script alone, while the
    parallel method starts up multiple server processes to run groups
    of tests in parallel.  Parallel testing gives confidence that
-   interprocess communication and locking are working correctly.  For
-   historical reasons, the sequential test is usually run against an
-   existing installation and the parallel method against a temporary
-   installation, but there are no technical reasons for this.
+   interprocess communication and locking are working correctly.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   To run the regression tests after building but before installation,
+   To run the parallel regression tests after building but before installation,
    type:
 <screen>
 gmake check
@@ -44,7 +41,7 @@ gmake check
    in the top-level directory.  (Or you can change to
    <filename>src/test/regress</filename> and run the command there.)
    This will first build several auxiliary files, such as
-   some sample user-defined trigger functions, and then run the test driver
+   sample user-defined trigger functions, and then run the test driver
    script.  At the end you should see something like:
 <screen>
 <computeroutput>
@@ -206,9 +203,9 @@ gmake installcheck
     <para>
      If you run the tests against a server that was
      initialized with a collation-order locale other than C, then
-     there might be differences due to sort order and follow-up
+     there might be differences due to sort order and subsequent
      failures.  The regression test suite is set up to handle this
-     problem by providing alternative result files that together are
+     problem by providing alternate result files that together are
      known to handle a large number of locales.
     </para>
 
@@ -270,7 +267,7 @@ gmake check NO_LOCALE=1
      results involving mathematical functions of <type>double
      precision</type> columns have been observed.  The <literal>float8</> and
      <literal>geometry</> tests are particularly prone to small differences
-     across platforms, or even with different compiler optimization options.
+     across platforms, or even with different compiler optimization setting.
      Human eyeball comparison is needed to determine the real
      significance of these differences which are usually 10 places to
      the right of the decimal point.
@@ -298,10 +295,10 @@ different order than what appears in the expected file.  In most cases
 this is not, strictly speaking, a bug.  Most of the regression test
 scripts are not so pedantic as to use an <literal>ORDER BY</> for every single
 <literal>SELECT</>, and so their result row orderings are not well-defined
-according to the letter of the SQL specification.  In practice, since we are
+according to the SQL specification.  In practice, since we are
 looking at the same queries being executed on the same data by the same
-software, we usually get the same result ordering on all platforms, and
-so the lack of <literal>ORDER BY</> isn't a problem.  Some queries do exhibit
+software, we usually get the same result ordering on all platforms,
+so the lack of <literal>ORDER BY</> is not a problem.  Some queries do exhibit
 cross-platform ordering differences, however.  When testing against an
 already-installed server, ordering differences can also be caused by
 non-C locale settings or non-default parameter settings, such as custom values
@@ -311,8 +308,8 @@ of <varname>work_mem</> or the planner cost parameters.
     <para>
 Therefore, if you see an ordering difference, it's not something to
 worry about, unless the query does have an <literal>ORDER BY</> that your
-result is violating.  But please report it anyway, so that we can add an
-<literal>ORDER BY</> to that particular query and thereby eliminate the bogus
+result is violating.  However, please report it anyway, so that we can add an
+<literal>ORDER BY</> to that particular query to eliminate the bogus
 <quote>failure</quote> in future releases.
     </para>
 
@@ -364,7 +361,7 @@ diff results/random.out expected/random.out
 
    <para>
     Since some of the tests inherently produce environment-dependent
-    results, we have provided ways to specify alternative <quote>expected</>
+    results, we have provided ways to specify alternate <quote>expected</>
     result files.  Each regression test can have several comparison files
     showing possible results on different platforms.  There are two
     independent mechanisms for determining which comparison file is used
@@ -410,7 +407,7 @@ testname:output:platformpattern=comparisonfilename
 <programlisting>
 float8:out:i.86-.*-openbsd=float8-small-is-zero.out
 </programlisting>
-    which will trigger on any machine for which the output of
+    which will trigger on any machine where the output of
     <command>config.guess</command> matches <literal>i.86-.*-openbsd</literal>.
     Other lines
     in <filename>resultmap</> select the variant comparison file for other

doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml,v 1.430 2010/01/11 18:39:32 tgl Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml,v 1.431 2010/02/03 17:25:06 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter Id="runtime">
  <title>Server Setup and Operation</title>
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>
-   As with any other server daemon that is accessible to the outside world,
+   As with any server daemon that is accessible to the outside world,
    it is advisable to run <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> under a
    separate user account. This user account should only own the data
    that is managed by the server, and should not be shared with other
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ postgres$ <userinput>initdb -D /usr/local/pgsql/data</userinput>
    superuser</></indexterm>  Also, specify <option>-A md5</> or
    <option>-A password</> so that the default <literal>trust</> authentication
    mode is not used; or modify the generated <filename>pg_hba.conf</filename>
-   file after running <command>initdb</command>,
+   file after running <command>initdb</command>, but
    <emphasis>before</> you start the server for the first time. (Other
    reasonable approaches include using <literal>ident</literal> authentication
    or file system permissions to restrict connections. See <xref
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ $ <userinput>postgres -D /usr/local/pgsql/data</userinput>
 
   <para>
    Normally it is better to start <command>postgres</command> in the
-   background.  For this, use the usual shell syntax:
+   background.  For this, use the usual Unix shell syntax:
 <screen>
 $ <userinput>postgres -D /usr/local/pgsql/data &gt;logfile 2&gt;&amp;1 &amp;</userinput>
 </screen>
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ DETAIL:  Failed system call was semget(5440126, 17, 03600).
     <para>
      Although the error conditions possible on the client side are quite
      varied and application-dependent, a few of them might be directly
-     related to how the server was started up. Conditions other than
+     related to how the server was started. Conditions other than
      those shown below should be documented with the respective client
      application.
     </para>
@@ -524,16 +524,16 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
     relevant for <productname>PostgreSQL</>). Almost all modern
     operating systems provide these features, but not all of them have
     them turned on or sufficiently sized by default, especially systems
-    with BSD heritage. (On <systemitem class="osname">Windows</>,
+    with a BSD heritage. (On <systemitem class="osname">Windows</>,
     <productname>PostgreSQL</> provides its own replacement 
-    implementation of these facilities, and so most of this section
+    implementation of these facilities, so most of this section
     can be disregarded.)
    </para>
 
    <para>
     The complete lack of these facilities is usually manifested by an
     <errorname>Illegal system call</> error upon server start. In
-    that case there's nothing left to do but to reconfigure your
+    that case there is no alternative but to reconfigure your
     kernel.  <productname>PostgreSQL</> won't work without them.
    </para>
 
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
     When <productname>PostgreSQL</> exceeds one of the various hard
     <acronym>IPC</> limits, the server will refuse to start and
     should leave an instructive error message describing the problem
-    encountered and what to do about it. (See also <xref
+    and what to do about it. (See also <xref
     linkend="server-start-failures">.) The relevant kernel
     parameters are named consistently across different systems; <xref
     linkend="sysvipc-parameters"> gives an overview. The methods to set
@@ -621,7 +621,7 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
        <row>
         <entry><varname>SEMVMX</></>
         <entry>Maximum value of semaphore</>
-        <entry>at least 1000 (The default is often 32767, don't change unless forced to)</>
+        <entry>at least 1000 (The default is often 32767; do not change unless necessary)</>
        </row>
 
      </tbody>
@@ -633,7 +633,7 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
     <indexterm><primary>SHMMAX</primary></indexterm> The most important
     shared memory parameter is <varname>SHMMAX</>, the maximum size, in
     bytes, of a shared memory segment. If you get an error message from
-    <function>shmget</> like <errorname>Invalid argument</>, it is
+    <function>shmget</> like <quote>Invalid argument</>, it is
     likely that this limit has been exceeded.  The size of the required
     shared memory segment varies depending on several
     <productname>PostgreSQL</> configuration parameters, as shown in
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
     least <literal>ceil((max_connections + autovacuum_max_workers) / 16)</>.
     Lowering the number
     of allowed connections is a temporary workaround for failures,
-    which are usually confusingly worded <errorname>No space
+    which are usually confusingly worded <quote>No space
     left on device</>, from the function <function>semget</>.
    </para>
 
@@ -706,8 +706,8 @@ psql: could not connect to server: No such file or directory
 
    <para>
     Various other settings related to <quote>semaphore undo</>, such as
-    <varname>SEMMNU</> and <varname>SEMUME</>, are not of concern
-    for <productname>PostgreSQL</>.
+    <varname>SEMMNU</> and <varname>SEMUME</>, do not affect
+    <productname>PostgreSQL</>.
    </para>
 
 
@@ -758,24 +758,6 @@ options "SHMMAX=\(SHMALL*PAGE_SIZE\)"
         </para>
        </formalpara>
 
-       <para>
-        For those running 4.0 and earlier releases, use <command>bpatch</>
-        to find the <varname>sysptsize</> value in the current
-        kernel. This is computed dynamically at boot time.
-<screen>
-$ <userinput>bpatch -r sysptsize</>
-<computeroutput>0x9 = 9</>
-</screen>
-        Next, add <varname>SYSPTSIZE</> as a hard-coded value in the
-        kernel configuration file. Increase the value you found using
-        <command>bpatch</>. Add 1 for every additional 4 MB of
-        shared memory you desire.
-<programlisting>
-options "SYSPTSIZE=16"
-</programlisting>
-        <varname>sysptsize</> cannot be changed by <command>sysctl</command>.
-       </para>
-
        <formalpara>
         <title>Semaphores</>
         <para>
@@ -837,9 +819,9 @@ options "SEMMNS=240"
         <literal>security.jail.sysvipc_allowed</>, <application>postmaster</>s
         running in different jails should be run by different operating system
         users.  This improves security because it prevents non-root users
-        from interfering with shared memory or semaphores in a different jail,
+        from interfering with shared memory or semaphores in different jails,
         and it allows the PostgreSQL IPC cleanup code to function properly.
-        (In FreeBSD 6.0 and later the IPC cleanup code doesn't properly detect
+        (In FreeBSD 6.0 and later the IPC cleanup code does not properly detect
         processes in other jails, preventing the running of postmasters on the
         same port in different jails.)
        </para>
@@ -863,7 +845,8 @@ options "SEMMNS=240"
         to be enabled when the kernel is compiled. (They are by
         default.) The maximum size of shared memory is determined by
         the option <varname>SHMMAXPGS</> (in pages). The following
-        shows an example of how to set the various parameters 
+        shows an example of how to set the various parameters on
+        <systemitem class="osname">NetBSD</>
         (<systemitem class="osname">OpenBSD</> uses <literal>option</> instead):
 <programlisting>
 options        SYSVSHM
@@ -902,7 +885,7 @@ options        SEMMAP=256
         <acronym>IPC</> parameters can be set in the <application>System
         Administration Manager</> (<acronym>SAM</>) under
         <menuchoice><guimenu>Kernel
-        Configuration</><guimenuitem>Configurable Parameters</></>. Hit
+        Configuration</><guimenuitem>Configurable Parameters</></>. Choose
         <guibutton>Create A New Kernel</> when you're done.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -926,8 +909,8 @@ options        SEMMAP=256
 <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>sysctl -w kernel.shmmax=134217728</userinput>
 <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>sysctl -w kernel.shmall=2097152</userinput>
 </screen>
-        In addition these settings can be saved between reboots in 
-        <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.
+        In addition these settings can be preserved  between reboots in
+        the file <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -964,7 +947,7 @@ sysctl -w kern.sysv.shmall
         In OS X 10.3 and later, these commands have been moved to
         <filename>/etc/rc</> and must be edited there.  Note that
         <filename>/etc/rc</> is usually overwritten by OS X updates (such as
-        10.3.6 to 10.3.7) so you should expect to have to redo your editing
+        10.3.6 to 10.3.7) so you should expect to have to redo your edits
         after each update.
        </para>
 
@@ -995,7 +978,7 @@ kern.sysv.shmall=1024
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        In all OS X versions, you'll need to reboot to make changes in the
+        In all OS X versions, you will need to reboot to have changes in the
         shared memory parameters take effect.  
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1304,11 +1287,11 @@ echo -17 > /proc/self/oom_adj
     Some vendors' Linux 2.4 kernels are reported to have early versions
     of the 2.6 overcommit <command>sysctl</command> parameter.  However, setting
     <literal>vm.overcommit_memory</> to 2
-    on a kernel that does not have the relevant code will make
-    things worse not better.  It is recommended that you inspect
+    on a 2.4 kernel that does not have the relevant code will make
+    things worse, not better.  It is recommended that you inspect
     the actual kernel source code (see the function
     <function>vm_enough_memory</> in the file <filename>mm/mmap.c</>)
-    to verify what is supported in your copy before you try this in a 2.4
+    to verify what is supported in your kernel before you try this in a 2.4
     installation.  The presence of the <filename>overcommit-accounting</>
     documentation file should <emphasis>not</> be taken as evidence that the
     feature is there.  If in any doubt, consult a kernel expert or your
@@ -1357,7 +1340,7 @@ echo -17 > /proc/self/oom_adj
        The server disallows new connections and sends all existing
        server processes <systemitem>SIGTERM</systemitem>, which will cause them
        to abort their current transactions and exit promptly. It then
-       waits for the server processes to exit and finally shuts down.
+       waits for all server processes to exit and finally shuts down.
        If the server is in online backup mode, backup mode will be
        terminated, rendering the backup useless.
       </para>
@@ -1428,7 +1411,7 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
   <para>
    While the server is running, it is not possible for a malicious user
    to take the place of the normal database server.  However, when the
-   server is down it is possible for a local user to spoof the normal
+   server is down, it is possible for a local user to spoof the normal
    server by starting their own server.  The spoof server could read
    passwords and queries sent by clients, but could not return any data
    because the <varname>PGDATA</> directory would still be secure because
@@ -1489,7 +1472,7 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
      the administrator cannot determine the actual password assigned
      to the user. If MD5 encryption is used for client authentication,
      the unencrypted password is never even temporarily present on the
-     server because the client MD5 encrypts it before being sent
+     server because the client MD5-encrypts it before being sent
      across the network.
     </para>
    </listitem>
@@ -1523,11 +1506,12 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
 
    <listitem>
     <para>
-     On Linux, encryption can be layered on top of a file system mount
+     On Linux, encryption can be layered on top of a file system
      using a <quote>loopback device</quote>. This allows an entire
-     file system partition be encrypted on disk, and decrypted by the
+     file system partition to be encrypted on disk, and decrypted by the
      operating system. On FreeBSD, the equivalent facility is called
-     GEOM Based Disk Encryption, or <acronym>gbde</acronym>.
+     GEOM Based Disk Encryption (<acronym>gbde</acronym>), and many
+     other operating systems support this functionality, including Windows.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -1550,7 +1534,7 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
      <para>
       The <literal>MD5</> authentication method double-encrypts the
       password on the client before sending it to the server. It first
-      MD5 encrypts it based on the user name, and then encrypts it
+      MD5-encrypts it based on the user name, and then encrypts it
       based on a random salt sent by the server when the database
       connection was made. It is this double-encrypted value that is
       sent over the network to the server. Double-encryption not only
@@ -1635,7 +1619,7 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
    <productname>PostgreSQL</> server can be started with
    <acronym>SSL</> enabled by setting the parameter
    <xref linkend="guc-ssl"> to <literal>on</> in
-   <filename>postgresql.conf</>.  The server will listen for both standard
+   <filename>postgresql.conf</>.  The server will listen for both normal
    and <acronym>SSL</> connections on the same TCP port, and will negotiate
    with any connecting client on whether to use <acronym>SSL</>.  By
    default, this is at the client's option; see <xref
@@ -1750,7 +1734,7 @@ $ <userinput>kill -INT `head -1 /usr/local/pgsql/data/postmaster.pid`</userinput
      <row>
       <entry><filename>server.key</></entry>
       <entry>server private key</entry>
-      <entry>proves server certificate sent by owner; does not indicate
+      <entry>proves server certificate was sent by the owner; it does not indicate
       certificate owner is trustworthy</entry>
      </row>
 
@@ -1828,7 +1812,7 @@ chmod og-rwx server.key
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>
-   One can use <application>SSH</application> to encrypt the network
+   It is possible to use <application>SSH</application> to encrypt the network
    connection between clients and a
    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> server. Done properly, this
    provides an adequately secure network connection, even for non-SSL-capable
@@ -1845,7 +1829,7 @@ chmod og-rwx server.key
 ssh -L 63333:localhost:5432 joe@foo.com
 </programlisting>
    The first number in the <option>-L</option> argument, 63333, is the
-   port number of your end of the tunnel; it can be chosen freely.
+   port number of your end of the tunnel; it can be any unused port.
    (IANA reserves ports 49152 through 65535 for private use.)  The
    second number, 5432, is the remote end of the tunnel: the port
    number your server is using. The name or IP address between the
@@ -1873,7 +1857,7 @@ psql -h localhost -p 63333 postgres
    In order for the
    tunnel setup to succeed you must be allowed to connect via
    <command>ssh</command> as <literal>joe@foo.com</literal>, just
-   as if you had attempted to use <command>ssh</command> to set up a
+   as if you had attempted to use <command>ssh</command> to create a
    terminal session.
   </para>
 

doc/src/sgml/user-manag.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/user-manag.sgml,v 1.41 2008/10/28 12:10:42 mha Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/user-manag.sgml,v 1.42 2010/02/03 17:25:06 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="user-manag">
  <title>Database Roles and Privileges</title>
@@ -11,8 +11,7 @@
   tables) and can assign privileges on those objects to other roles to
   control who has access to which objects.  Furthermore, it is possible
   to grant <firstterm>membership</> in a role to another role, thus
-  allowing the member role use of privileges assigned to the role it is
-  a member of.
+  allowing the member role to use privileges assigned to another role.
  </para>
 
  <para>
@@ -110,9 +109,9 @@ SELECT rolname FROM pg_roles;
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   Every connection to the database server is made in the name of some
+   Every connection to the database server is made using the name of some
    particular role, and this role determines the initial access privileges for
-   commands issued on that connection.
+   commands issued in that connection.
    The role name to use for a particular database
    connection is indicated by the client that is initiating the
    connection request in an application-specific fashion. For example,
@@ -129,11 +128,11 @@ SELECT rolname FROM pg_roles;
    The set of database roles a given client connection can connect as
    is determined by the client authentication setup, as explained in
    <xref linkend="client-authentication">. (Thus, a client is not
-   necessarily limited to connect as the role with the same name as
+   limited to connect as the role matching
    its operating system user, just as a person's login name 
    need not match her real name.)  Since the role
    identity determines the set of privileges available to a connected
-   client, it is important to carefully configure this when setting up
+   client, it is important to carefully configure privileges when setting up
    a multiuser environment.
   </para>
  </sect1>
@@ -152,7 +151,7 @@ SELECT rolname FROM pg_roles;
        <para>
         Only roles that have the <literal>LOGIN</> attribute can be used
         as the initial role name for a database connection.  A role with
-        the <literal>LOGIN</> attribute can be considered the same thing
+        the <literal>LOGIN</> attribute can be considered the same
         as a <quote>database user</>.  To create a role with login privilege,
         use either:
 <programlisting>
@@ -204,7 +203,7 @@ CREATE USER <replaceable>name</replaceable>;
         other roles, too, as well as grant or revoke membership in them.
         However, to create, alter, drop, or change membership of a
         superuser role, superuser status is required;
-        <literal>CREATEROLE</> is not sufficient for that.
+        <literal>CREATEROLE</> is insufficient for that.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -250,15 +249,15 @@ CREATE USER <replaceable>name</replaceable>;
    want to disable index scans (hint: not a good idea) anytime you
    connect, you can use:
 <programlisting>
-ALTER ROLE myname SET enable_indexscan TO off;
+ALTER ROLE myname SET statement_timeout = '5min';
 </programlisting>
    This will save the setting (but not set it immediately).  In
    subsequent connections by this role it will appear as though
-   <literal>SET enable_indexscan TO off;</literal> had been executed
+   <literal>SET statement_timeout = '5min'</literal> had been executed
    just before the session started.
    You can still alter this setting during the session; it will only
    be the default. To remove a role-specific default setting, use
-   <literal>ALTER ROLE <replaceable>rolename</> RESET <replaceable>varname</>;</literal>.
+   <literal>ALTER ROLE <replaceable>rolename</> RESET <replaceable>varname</></literal>.
    Note that role-specific defaults attached to roles without
    <literal>LOGIN</> privilege are fairly useless, since they will never
    be invoked.
@@ -381,15 +380,16 @@ REVOKE <replaceable>group_role</replaceable> FROM <replaceable>role1</replaceabl
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   The members of a role can use the privileges of the group role in two
+   The members of a group role can use the privileges of the role in two
    ways.  First, every member of a group can explicitly do
    <xref linkend="sql-set-role" endterm="sql-set-role-title"> to
    temporarily <quote>become</> the group role.  In this state, the
    database session has access to the privileges of the group role rather
    than the original login role, and any database objects created are
    considered owned by the group role not the login role.  Second, member
-   roles that have the <literal>INHERIT</> attribute automatically have use of
-   privileges of roles they are members of.  As an example, suppose we have
+   roles that have the <literal>INHERIT</> attribute automatically inherit the
+   privileges of roles of which they are members, including their
+   <literal>INHERIT</> attributes.  As an example, suppose we have
    done:
 <programlisting>
 CREATE ROLE joe LOGIN INHERIT;
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ RESET ROLE;
    special privileges, but they are never inherited as ordinary privileges
    on database objects are.  You must actually <command>SET ROLE</> to a
    specific role having one of these attributes in order to make use of
-   the attribute.  Continuing the above example, we might well choose to
+   the attribute.  Continuing the above example, we might choose to
    grant <literal>CREATEDB</> and <literal>CREATEROLE</> to the
    <literal>admin</> role.  Then a session connecting as role <literal>joe</>
    would not have these privileges immediately, only after doing
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ DROP ROLE <replaceable>name</replaceable>;
  </sect1>
 
  <sect1 id="perm-functions">
-  <title>Functions and Triggers</title>
+  <title>Function and Trigger Security</title>
 
   <para>
    Functions and triggers allow users to insert code into the backend

doc/src/sgml/wal.sgml

-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/wal.sgml,v 1.60 2009/11/28 16:21:31 momjian Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/wal.sgml,v 1.61 2010/02/03 17:25:06 momjian Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="wal">
  <title>Reliability and the Write-Ahead Log</title>
@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@
   <para>
    Next, there might be a cache in the disk drive controller; this is
    particularly common on <acronym>RAID</> controller cards. Some of
-   these caches are <firstterm>write-through</>, meaning writes are passed
-   along to the drive as soon as they arrive. Others are
-   <firstterm>write-back</>, meaning data is passed on to the drive at
+   these caches are <firstterm>write-through</>, meaning writes are sent
+   to the drive as soon as they arrive. Others are
+   <firstterm>write-back</>, meaning data is sent to the drive at
    some later time. Such caches can be a reliability hazard because the
    memory in the disk controller cache is volatile, and will lose its
    contents in a power failure.  Better controller cards have
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
    particularly likely to have write-back caches that will not survive a
    power failure.  To check write caching on <productname>Linux</> use
    <command>hdparm -I</>;  it is enabled if there is a <literal>*</> next
-   to <literal>Write cache</>.  <command>hdparm -W</> to turn off
+   to <literal>Write cache</>; <command>hdparm -W</> to turn off
    write caching.  On <productname>FreeBSD</> use
    <application>atacontrol</>.  (For SCSI disks use <ulink
    url="http://sg.torque.net/sg/sdparm.html"><application>sdparm</></ulink>
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   When the operating system sends a write request to the disk hardware,
+   When the operating system sends a write request to the storage hardware,
    there is little it can do to make sure the data has arrived at a truly
    non-volatile storage area. Rather, it is the
-   administrator's responsibility to be sure that all storage components
+   administrator's responsibility to make certain that all storage components
    ensure data integrity.  Avoid disk controllers that have non-battery-backed
    write caches.  At the drive level, disable write-back caching if the
    drive cannot guarantee the data will be written before shutdown.
@@ -100,11 +100,11 @@
    to power loss at any time, meaning some of the 512-byte sectors were
    written, and others were not.  To guard against such failures,
    <productname>PostgreSQL</> periodically writes full page images to
-   permanent storage <emphasis>before</> modifying the actual page on
+   permanent WAL storage <emphasis>before</> modifying the actual page on
    disk. By doing this, during crash recovery <productname>PostgreSQL</> can
    restore partially-written pages.  If you have a battery-backed disk
    controller or file-system software that prevents partial page writes
-   (e.g., ReiserFS 4),  you can turn off this page imaging by using the
+   (e.g., ZFS),  you can turn off this page imaging by turning off the
    <xref linkend="guc-full-page-writes"> parameter.
   </para>
  </sect1>
@@ -140,12 +140,12 @@
    <tip>
     <para>
      Because <acronym>WAL</acronym> restores database file
-     contents after a crash, journaled filesystems are not necessary for
+     contents after a crash, journaled file systems are not necessary for
      reliable storage of the data files or WAL files.  In fact, journaling
      overhead can reduce performance, especially if journaling
      causes file system <emphasis>data</emphasis> to be flushed
      to disk.  Fortunately, data flushing during journaling can
-     often be disabled with a filesystem mount option, e.g.
+     often be disabled with a file system mount option, e.g.
      <literal>data=writeback</> on a Linux ext3 file system.
      Journaled file systems do improve boot speed after a crash.
     </para>
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@
    committing at about the same time.  Setting <varname>commit_delay</varname>
    can only help when there are many concurrently committing transactions,
    and it is difficult to tune it to a value that actually helps rather
-   than hurting throughput.
+   than hurt throughput.
   </para>
 
  </sect1>
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@
   <para>
    <firstterm>Checkpoints</firstterm><indexterm><primary>checkpoint</></>
    are points in the sequence of transactions at which it is guaranteed
-   that the data files have been updated with all information written before
+   that the heap and index data files have been updated with all information written before
    the checkpoint.  At checkpoint time, all dirty data pages are flushed to
    disk and a special checkpoint record is written to the log file. 
    (The changes were previously flushed to the <acronym>WAL</acronym> files.)
@@ -349,18 +349,18 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   The server's background writer process will automatically perform
+   The server's background writer process automatically performs
    a checkpoint every so often.  A checkpoint is created every <xref
    linkend="guc-checkpoint-segments"> log segments, or every <xref
    linkend="guc-checkpoint-timeout"> seconds, whichever comes first.
-   The default settings are 3 segments and 300 seconds respectively.
+   The default settings are 3 segments and 300 seconds (5 minutes), respectively.
    It is also possible to force a checkpoint by using the SQL command
    <command>CHECKPOINT</command>.
   </para>
 
   <para>
    Reducing <varname>checkpoint_segments</varname> and/or
-   <varname>checkpoint_timeout</varname> causes checkpoints to be done
+   <varname>checkpoint_timeout</varname> causes checkpoints to occur
    more often. This allows faster after-crash recovery (since less work
    will need to be redone). However, one must balance this against the
    increased cost of flushing dirty data pages more often. If
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@
    server processes to add their commit records to the log so as to have all
    of them flushed with a single log sync. No sleep will occur if
    <xref linkend="guc-fsync">
-   is not enabled, nor if fewer than <xref linkend="guc-commit-siblings">
+   is not enabled, or if fewer than <xref linkend="guc-commit-siblings">
    other sessions are currently in active transactions; this avoids
    sleeping when it's unlikely that any other session will commit soon.
    Note that on most platforms, the resolution of a sleep request is
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@
    The <xref linkend="guc-wal-sync-method"> parameter determines how
    <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> will ask the kernel to force
     <acronym>WAL</acronym> updates out to disk.
-   All the options should be the same as far as reliability goes,
+   All the options should be the same in terms of reliability,
    but it's quite platform-specific which one will be the fastest.
    Note that this parameter is irrelevant if <varname>fsync</varname>
    has been turned off.
@@ -521,26 +521,26 @@
    <filename>access/xlog.h</filename>; the record content is dependent
    on the type of event that is being logged.  Segment files are given
    ever-increasing numbers as names, starting at
-   <filename>000000010000000000000000</filename>.  The numbers do not wrap, at
-   present, but it should take a very very long time to exhaust the
+   <filename>000000010000000000000000</filename>.  The numbers do not wrap,
+   but it will take a very, very long time to exhaust the
    available stock of numbers.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   It is of advantage if the log is located on another disk than the
-   main database files.  This can be achieved by moving the directory
-   <filename>pg_xlog</filename> to another location (while the server
+   It is advantageous if the log is located on a different disk from the
+   main database files.  This can be achieved by moving the
+   <filename>pg_xlog</filename> directory to another location (while the server
    is shut down, of course) and creating a symbolic link from the
    original location in the main data directory to the new location.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   The aim of <acronym>WAL</acronym>, to ensure that the log is
-   written before database records are altered, can be subverted by
+   The aim of <acronym>WAL</acronym> is to ensure that the log is
+   written before database records are altered, but this can be subverted by
    disk drives<indexterm><primary>disk drive</></> that falsely report a
    successful write to the kernel,
    when in fact they have only cached the data and not yet stored it
-   on the disk.  A power failure in such a situation might still lead to
+   on the disk.  A power failure in such a situation might lead to
    irrecoverable data corruption.  Administrators should try to ensure
    that disks holding <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>'s
    <acronym>WAL</acronym> log files do not make such false reports.
@@ -549,8 +549,8 @@
   <para>
    After a checkpoint has been made and the log flushed, the
    checkpoint's position is saved in the file
-   <filename>pg_control</filename>. Therefore, when recovery is to be
-   done, the server first reads <filename>pg_control</filename> and
+   <filename>pg_control</filename>. Therefore, at the start of recovery,
+   the server first reads <filename>pg_control</filename> and
    then the checkpoint record; then it performs the REDO operation by
    scanning forward from the log position indicated in the checkpoint
    record.  Because the entire content of data pages is saved in the
@@ -562,12 +562,12 @@
 
   <para>
    To deal with the case where <filename>pg_control</filename> is
-   corrupted, we should support the possibility of scanning existing log
+   corrupt, we should support the possibility of scanning existing log
    segments in reverse order &mdash; newest to oldest &mdash; in order to find the
    latest checkpoint.  This has not been implemented yet.
    <filename>pg_control</filename> is small enough (less than one disk page)
    that it is not subject to partial-write problems, and as of this writing
-   there have been no reports of database failures due solely to inability
+   there have been no reports of database failures due solely to the inability
    to read <filename>pg_control</filename> itself.  So while it is
    theoretically a weak spot, <filename>pg_control</filename> does not
    seem to be a problem in practice.